dond listen westfanem he loves hurt Poeple and make Flames
he have no Live .
U wrote good let them bla bla bla
please dond be hurt,
who the are ,nobody ,
its not bad what u writing

Write more(: I love this

Omg this is awesome I seriously love this. Write more! :D

Are there going to be anymore?

cool, vas happening with Mimi, I beg of you please continue

Hi. I really loved your story I wish this wasn't the end. Well your an amaizingwriter and I can't wait to read more of you stories!

You said tiggle instead of tickle.

Utterly childish, what are you 10?

What does this have to do with Wonderland? Also, real person fanfictions are against the rules at FFN. But there are great sites like Archive Of Our Own or The Writer's Coffee Shop that do accept rpf. Chances are good that your story could/will be reported and deleted.

Best of luck with your writing.

Using real/non-historical people in your fics is against the rules. I strongly advise you to alter your work, in case somebody decides to report it.

Have a nice day,

Tallz

Just a warning to all, there are two groups called Critics United and Literate Union who are currently going around and mass reporting on ANY story they deem to be breaking FF rules. This includes, but is not limited to: stories with MA or above rated content, though now they're claiming any kind of lemon is breaking the rules, Songfic's, any story that seems “Semi-hostile” to them, any story that has a “disregard for grammar”, and any stories with polls, authors notes, or otherwise in place of an actual chapter update, you could even end up accidentally putting your story into what they view as being the “incorrect category” and they’ll report you for it. The stories are being deleted with little to no warning given, often within hours of one of their members locating it. If you want try to help stop the "cleansing" of this site and protest their bullying go to: www . change petitions/ fanfiction-net-stop-the-destruction-of-fanfiction- net and sign the petition in hopes of helping to stop the destruction of FF . net! Also, in case your interested, theirs places like: media miner, archive of our own . org, Your Fan Fiction . com, and adult fanfiction . net where you could post your stories as a back up, but hopefully you won't have to worry about it to begin with.

I'm sorry, but what exactly has this to do with Adventures In Wonderland? I know it's not the most popular show in the world, but I'm surprised one of your other reviewers hasn't pointed this small problem out by now!

Um. More. It was wonderful definitely write more on this!

hey :) just read the rest of it i really liked it, once your finished with this story you should make another one :)

AWW, that was cute (:

Awesome chapter and awesome story, am enjoying reading this. :D

Post Soon!

stuckintheskies xx