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| LexraHeart 2008-05-23 ch 3, | abusevery good for someone who hasn't played the game before, but it explains why Squall at times seemed a little OOC. ^-^ But very nie |
| Adelina Milano 2006-11-25 ch 3, anon. | abuseQuite good! i approve! good job and right more! (maybe a Squinoa) -Addie |
| Maatlockk 2006-11-12 ch 3, | abusei know that this is a romance fic, but the whole time reading this, i was at the edge of my seat! i was all 'no selphie! no!' and 'dammit irvine!! hurry!' i enjoyed reading this piece. i can never write a romance / humor or any other fic for that matter without making it smutty or too formal. why? cause the university has forever made my writing skills theirs - ACADEMIC ESSAYS!! but this one, well, loved it. every chapter. bravo! i'm definitely adding this to my favorite stories list. |
| Ayame 125 2006-11-09 ch 3, | abuseLol. Aw, it's over. Not that bad, but very short. It was still good. Poor Irvy, silly Irvy. If Squall was laughing at him, then that means he was really out of it. Lol. It's easier to see what's really going on when you're not one of the people involved. Lol. Really funny. Poor Selphie, almost raped by...Brad. Ugh! Lol. Can't wait to read more of your work! (My first time reading a FF8 fic) |
| Breathless Aeris 2006-09-23 ch 3, | abuseI loved this story, I hope you write more like this. |
| GiGgLyGaL 2006-04-30 ch 3, | abuseThat was a very, very cute story. I love Selvine...I liked how Selphie gave him a taste of his own medicine...cute... |
| BestInInfluence 2004-09-30 ch 3, | abuseThis isn't sic6-blank. This si his sister and he refered your story to me! ^.^ OMG! You're story is amazing. Please if you write anymore like these could you send them to me by e mail? I would SO much love to read more of your writting! My email is: lennym78@ Please!? You're such a talented writer, I really admire you're writting. So sincerely, Lindsay (sic6-blank's sister) |
| hearthands 2003-06-30 ch 3, | abuseOMG, this story isso sweet. Irvine and Selphie are so cute together! Way to go! |
| Kaede-Alex 2002-08-12 ch 3, anon. | abusea top notch story!!! two thumps up!!! and you completed it in 3 chapters... i wish i could write like you... T_T unfortunately, im still s2pid at writing... T_T |
| Athena88 2002-06-07 ch 3, | abuseI loved this! This is really good! |
| chocobo yuna 2002-05-25 ch 3, | abusethis was real good for being your first FF fic, maybe you can write more, cuz that wouls be real cool :) |
| green flip-flops 2002-05-24 ch 3, | abuseGreat! You should write more stories! I'll read most of them since you are an OUTSTANDING author |
| meeeeee 2002-05-24 ch 3, anon. | abuseWHEEEEEEE GOOOOIRVYYYYY!! YAYYY IRVY SAVED THE DAAAYY *dances around happily* (you never played f8? wow...BUT LUV UR FICCIE!) *GUUUSH* IRVY!!!! (meee liiiike selvine ficcis) |
| Witch Baby 2002-05-24 ch 3, | abuseDaww, that was just so darn sweet *g* I loved the ending, and I hope you keep writing |
| green flip-flops 2002-05-22 ch 2, | abusehey! you put me in at the end. in fact, i think what you said was true. i'll never be a bestselling author. sigh. oh well, there's plenty of other jobs out there. you're the one with the talent not me. oh, right! the story is good. ill add you to my favorite authors list |