Yai

I really liked your fic, and I also I do not think Naru Keitaro abusase, although it is sometimes deserved, as Motoko and Kitsune another. I liked the couple that you did between L unay Keitaro, and I welcome you also to stay in ponny ville shinobu and Mutsumi.

Nothing more to say that your fic will stay nice and excuse my bad English

I speak in spanish latin

only thing i have against it is that it is written more like a script than a story. Other than that I do like it.

I like it.