Love it! But agoraphobia is fear of being in a large crowd like in a store, concert, etc.

Do you think you could make a story about Astley and Zara's lives after Endure? That would be really great! :D

this is really good :)

OMG i can already tell this story is going to leve its mark,siriusly,i just finished reading it and in like totaly in love wid it! cant freaking wate for da next chaptr!

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Hi!

I just want to say I love where you could take this story and that this plot line really hasn't been done before. No spelling or grammar mistakes that I saw.

Ciao,

Becca

The story is great :) and you captured her pretty well. I can't Waite to see astley soon I hope