good story it was cute but at the same time deep emotionally.

Cool!

It was ok but it was like you wer talking to a child add MORE adult ...things

i just have three words 4 u...THAT WAS AWSOME!

umm that was rather to romantic. Not that I'm complaining but at least its not angst(sigh of relief)

This is kinda a big question but can I be a

Pre-reader?

this is a very sweet, amazing fic! it's so beautiful! it's one of those fics that make you read them all over again! loved it! can't wait for more! ttfn!

SO COOL!

Nice story, I liked the way the different flashbacks tied in with the tale. Nice one!

AAUK.

aw dis was cute! better than i thought, and u used the title really well...

Dear Usagi3000,

I love your story, but you have screwed up the TV show storyline. In Season 01, T.K. and Kari are 8 years old, Tai, Matt, Sora are 12, Mimi and Izzy are 11 and Joe is 13. Just add three years for Season 02 ages. Davis and Ken are 11 along with T.K. and Kari while Cody is 8, and Yolei is 12.

T'was very good! I suppose you have to put out another Takari now _

good! keep up the good work!

Hmmmm...good!

You're right, romance readers do like. I like the format, it's an interesting twist. You did good, Usako, really good. Here's the critic, signing off.

I LOVE MICHI!