Dem wath hapen next can you finish the history , is so good and interesting, please do not take to much time and continue with the history. Tanks
Maria Hernandez

is so good then feel like Jim Butcher writhing , men you are fabuloso.

Please update, this is the one the best dresden files fics out there

Finally got around to sending a review. Thoroughly enjoyable chapter. I think you have captured Mr Butchers style very well including the combat scenes. I was going to offer a larger critique but other than a few typos I really didn't have any criticisms and I've already told you on more than one occasion that you're an outstanding writer so I guess the only thing left to say is keep up the good work

I am thoroughly enjoying Shilpa's crush on Harry. Nice job with the action.

That looks like a cliffhanger. Don't leave us hanging for too long.

Great Chapter! I really enjoy the interactions of the characters.

Good story man, nice interplay with his peeps. Can't wait to see what you'll end up doing with listens.

I am really curious about what those rumors are about Harry. I hope we get to see a couple. Mouse was awesome in showing off his new power. Yay for the rescue, and I hope to read more soon.

I've edited Chapter 6 to fix a few errors both in wording as well as a glaring logic issue. That and for some reason the ... ... ... break from the letter to the story at the top didn't make it through translation the first time, so that's fixed too. :)

I hope you enjoy this chapter and will update soon.

I must say that I'm quite impressed. Your writing style is virtually identical to Mr Butcher's If someone had given me a sample of your writing and asked me if i thought it was a piece of his work I would have said most certainly.

Nice job man glad to see you are continuing the story!

Yay, long time no read.

It was great to see Harry shock the wardens like that. Nice to see him lay down the law.

The touch of romance at the end was nicely done as well.

I actually smiled when I saw the announcement in my e-mail that you had posted another chapter. It was sort of like an old friend that you hadn't seen in quite a while dropping by e unexpectedly. this was a very foreboding chapter I could feel the tension in the air as the Wardens prepared for the expected attack.

I'm not sure if incents is the word you wanted to use. Or is it an alternative spelling for incense? Other than that I would say it was a flawless chapter.

You did a very good jog of making Henderson unlikable in just a few sentences and there was some nice dramatic interplay between Harry and Anastasia at the end of the chapter. Mouse is probably worth a squad of normal Wardens. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Cool story bro

Nice concept and execution, your writing has also improved compared to the Angels stories. Perhaps you could use italics instead of capitals and fewer exclamation marks to emphasize things, it just seems to fit more with Butcher's writing style.