Excellent. Incredibly well done.

I loved it! Good story.

This story is AMAZING! I don't know what you're worried about. Anyone who is a true appreciator of The Princess Academy will love this story! I really like how it goes along perfectly with the actual story. I mean, I know it's supposed to follow the story line, but this is, like, perfect! Where did you get the insiration for this? Were you a) reading the book and this just popped into your head, b) doing something completely unrelated to The Princess Academy and it randomly popped into you head, c) talking to a friend and they suggested it, or d) none of the above?

A little more romance would have been but overall great story

Amazing. Well done.

aww! i always wondered what Peder was thinking :)

That...that was adorable. Insta-fave, right here.

It is AWESOME!

Definitely ... AMAZING.

Absolutely wonderful in every way I was so sad when I finished the book and this just made my day :-)

its great loved it

I think this was quite good and it filled in the gaps a bit.

Excellent! I was looking for a story that would cover this, and you handled it wonderfully! I only wish you would've carried it on a little bit past this, so we could see his first conversation with Miri after the bandits (and the first after recognizing his love for her). I really enjoyed this piece and I look forward to seeing what else you've written :) Keep up the good work!
God bless ;D

You have to do a part 2 to this. It is amazing. I love it so much and if you do I will be the happiest person ever!

Please. Please. Do anying for her part 2 I will be the happy's person alive if u do