Well i liked it! _ cute ]

i already read the extended version, but i still think both are amazing!

WAI _ Nii-san that was awesome... I wuff it... *still in romance mode* I want to be Tiff... I want to go on that kind of date... oh my gawsh.. these fic wake up feeling in me... GOD STORY!

dis suckss rily rily bad u shud see sumone who cud rily write yeah maybe dats a good idea huh?

cuz ya kno, ive read bettah ficz dan dis one! mwahaha

and by d way, i find dis fic corny and too sappy and too ugh... cannot describe it anymore!

I LOVE THIS STORY! Keep writing CLOTIs PLEASE! I am begging ya!

THAT WAS AWESOME! THE BEST FUCKING CLOTI I HAVE EVER READ ON THIS EARTH... LOL... Alot better then mine, oh well, I like reading more then I like writing

Hey, Riyuji!

You know me... Anywayz, good ficcy!Please continue.

Oh, and I did a Zell viginette in cas you were wondering.

Some of your sentences are a little awkward. For instance, "Although this may be true, neither one of them would admit their true feelings for the other, because neither Cloud nor Tifa had enough courage to pour their soul out for the other." This would flow much better if you simplified it to "Neither had the courage to admit their true feelings to the other." The rest is just redundancy.

Also, you'll say things like "Tifa then asked Cloud a question." And then she asks it in another sentence. The whole purpose of this seems to be to point out that it was Tifa rather than Cloud saying the words, so it'd be simpler just to write, "Tifa asked, 'Blah blah.'"

oh my gosh where do i start? how about...YOU HAVE SOO MUCH TALENT! This fic is one of the greatest ones i have read in a LOOOOOONG time.. i suggest you keep writing. _ trust me..you're really good at this.

Awwww! How cute! This was a well done fic! Hope to see more of your work! Peaceout peep!D

awww how kawaii! i total adore cloti fanfic so much! im sucka for good romance stories. LoL anyways good job! ja ne!