Squeee! WOWWWWW that was just amazing! I loooooved it! I loved everything in it! It was truly amazing, especially the stuff in the brackets! I love your sarcasm! Thank you so much for writing this story and please write more!

Ohsweetbabyjesus. :O

This was well-written and very fun to read! you have this very unique and incredibly good writing style that I just adore! I hope you write more on these two. They are my favorite pairing :)

That was funny and cute! I liked it! Great job on this!

That was your first time, really? Well I think you did great!

Honestly the hole story was written extremely well. I loved the way you wrote Bakura. I guess compared to how he is in the anime/manga, yeah, you can consider him a little OOC. But I honestly think that his personality fit wonderfully here!

I seriously cannot think of one part I didn't end up absolutey loving lol

You did such an amazing job on this and you should be really proud with the results.

Thanks so much for sharing, I enjoyed the hell out of this!

Ho snap, Ryou had me worried there for a bit. I thought he was actually going out with Miho. o.o The ending(ish) made me laugh. Really hard. xD

And this is your first time writing something of this nature...? Are you sure? I mean, you haven't taken any lessons while asleep or anything, right? It's pretty good for a first time, I really like it. w Great job, and write more soon!

I loved this so much! you've got no idea! Tendershipping FTW

Ah, I think it was good! Great one-shot!

The Mariks are a scheming pair of bastards. Oh well, it's all for the better!

I love your story, it's too cute!