Holy Hudson Mason (inside joke hehe)! What the hell, Soap? This is getting so freaking good! Don't leave me with a cliffhanger! I gotta know! I barely know what to say, this chapter was undoubtedly amazing! You're not a horrible person, but I will, most likely, curse your name every second I'm dying and waiting for an update... Haha curing your name in a good way. If there is one:)

Please update soon, pretty please! I'll be your best friend!... You might not update then. haha. Please update when you can before my head explodes. By the way, in case you haven't noticed, I love this story! haha

Awww, that was so nice. And i just loved Melody: "You go and kiss him: if it feels right, that's love, if not – that will be awkward." And Soap, really: Show off, much? :D :D :D Update soon!

I really liked this story... until you put Melody in it...

Awww, this has to be my favorite by far. Chloe and Soap are cute together:) And you got me interested in Mike and his journal. I wanna read it! Haha.

Wish I could say more for this awesome chapter, but my dictionary is a little dry at the moment:) Update when you can, please:)

I will admit that at the beginning i didn't like your story. It was bad in it's execution and i just didn't get it. But know, it's like a whole other story! I'm glad that you improved your writing skills and grammar. If you'll keep up the good job I'm pretty sure your story will be awesome.

""Any questions?" Price asked in a calmer but still annoyed tone. Yuri shot his hand up and with a smirk on his face and asked:

"Chloe, is that a hickie on your neck?"

Chloe's hand shot up to cover one side of her neck. She glanced over at Nikolai and Mike who were covering their mouths, probably to hide the smile. When she looked at Melody, who mouthed to her: "On the other side." She quickly covered the other side of her neck, tracing with her finger the little bruise. Price coughed awkwardly and told everyone to get on the helicopter." - I think Price was the most awkward of them all :D Awesome chapter, can't wait for Chloe-Soap talk :D Update soon :D

I completely loved this chapter:) Poor Chloe, she must've been embarrassed as hell! Lol. What's up with Melody? Hmm; change of heart, perhaps? And agh! I cannot wait to see what Soap and Chloe are going to do about their litte *cough* moment.

Update when you can and I understand about the final tests. I guess school is more important then Fanfiction. I learned that the hard way lol.

But, overall, this chapter was amazing as always.

Haha! I freaking loved it! High-five Soap! Lol, I loved this and cannot wait to find out what happens next. Update soon please!:D

Oh my God. They.. They... OMG! They slept together! AAAAAAAAA! Soap planned everything! OMGGGGGGG update soon!

Omg! I want to know who did this to Kamarov's base! Also, i loved Aleksei's line from the previous chapter: I bet all my Pokemon cards it was Makarov! :D :D :D soo funny! Update soon, please?

Loved it. Thank you for an almost immediate update! Poor Puppy! I would've totally slapped Soap and probably squeeze th dog to death. Well, then maybe I shouldn't have held the dog:)

I can't wait for the next update! :D

Haha loved it. Especially with Chloe and Soap. Can't wait to see how they act when the hunt for Makarov is in play.

How you tease me with the sneak peek! Haha, loved it and cannot wait for the update.

So, please update soon:)

nice! it's pretty good, actually :) You've done a good job of not turning her into a Sue :) UPDATEEEEEEE! :D

I really wanted to like this story. The concept is very intriguing and unique, especially compared to the usual "woman in 141" suefic. But this story is terrible in its execution.

First of all, the writing is incredibly sloppy. It's confusing and vague, hard to read. There are parts that even seem to contradict themselves. There is constant switching of tenses and perspectives as well as wall-of-text and improper formatting. This story is painful to read.

And then there's Chloe Salling. I don't think this is the intent, but she seems like a Sue. Long descriptions, a bit weird, romance with major character, and related to another. The final straw is when she is taken into the 141 despite having the wrong background and no experience.

It's quite disappointing that this story is so awful. I would love to see a rewritten version, because the basic idea is good.

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