YES, I READ IT, OKAY! WHOO. I AM AWESOME. LET'S CELEBRATE.

So I like the idea of Joshua killing his friend to get to be the Composer. It's in character. He shouldn't give very many shits about anything, so I can see this happening for realsies. Also, I think i did a double take when I saw Cordis's name! Yeah, Angel gave me a few names to choose from, and I picked Cordis. I can't remember what it means though. .

Gosh, I'm trying to recall my thoughts on this. Yes, creepy Joshua is my favorite, I'll never deny it. I feel like we haven't seen him around girls enough.

Ah, Rhyme. Too sweet, too sweet. But I really liked what you did, with the coin thing. I think if you wanted to you could've wrapped a whole oneshot around just that.

Bless you, Rhyme, you're so calm. I CAN'T WRITE HER LIKE THAT ANYMORE? Whenever I try, she always ends up being weird. I don't know.

Subtle romance. This is cute. I enjoyed the gun part very much! It was relevant to my interests. XD But what you did was clever, and I did see how it was influenced by one of Saro's stories, but I don't hold you to that. You managed to condense it into a oneshot, that's something for sure. I also REALLY liked Rhyme at the end. Joshua!Rhyme is an appealing character turn.

The writing was lovely, though I did feel a little off with the time skip. Of course, I'm the type of person who needs to see some legitimate potential in a pairing to really get myself feeling for it, which is why my crack and canon pairings are so skewed. I can imagine my crack pairings so easily, it's like, "HOLY SHIT, HOPE, GO MARRY ARADIA, RIGHT THIS MINUTE, GO." But then with canon I'm like, "Oh, well, that's nice looking, you are friends with her, and she's sweet, and you're a team, and oh... oh... what are these feelings... ANGIE, CALL THE MEDIC, I AM HAVING FEELINGS."

This rule applies to the fact that I cannot see Nine and Deuce because I am so wrapped up in Deuce and Ace's friendship that I don't give a shit about Nine. Actually, Ace and Eight are the only guys in Type-0 that I care about? Wait, why am I talking about a game you know nothing about? Agggh. I just have all the feels for Ace and Deuce, but I feel like no one ships them. The first gif I ever saw of them, I thought they were Denzel and Marlene, so I just kind of flipped out. (This gif is now heartbreaking when I look back on it, since I actually know what's happening)

Also, I have a problem with creepy relationships. RUMPELSTILTSKIN AND BELLE. THEY'RE MY OTP FOR ONCE UPON A TIME. SOMETHING IS WRONG WITH ME. They make me so happy, I can't even...

Okay, I am SUPER DUPER TIRED, so please accept my apology for not getting to this sooner! I've been writing a lot, and I kept putting it off, and I had to beta read, and I was sobbing grossly over Rumpelstiltskin and Belle... ahhh, I have issues.

THANK YOU SO MUCH, SHAN! *Glomp* I really loved it, and I wish the review could be more detailed, but I'm about to crash, so I'll talk to you soon? I'm really glad I have a friend like you. D YOU REMEMBERED MY BIRTHDAY, AND (emphasize that) YOU GOT IT UP ON TIME. I AM INCAPABLE OF DOING THAT. So thank you so, so much, and I'm sorry it took me so long to read. ;-;