Hmm... I like the idea, I really do. I doubt it'd be canon, but it's an interesting thought.

Well written overall, no typos or grammatical errors that I could detect.

There was a great potential longer fanfic in there in the plot MoonHawkD'Alena, I certainly think that you should continue. The pairing between Lil and Hadrix, I don't think, has ever been mentioned before. Excellent work!

This was great! I'd love to see more from you!