|Reviews for Bad Prophecies|
| Ilovewriting618 4/1/13 . chapter 1
I think that it could be good, but you don't have the best spelling and grammar. Plus, script format will ruin any story.
| xJenzaFreakx 10/29/12 . chapter 1
"Bad Prophecies"? More like Bad Writing. No offense, I'm not trying to flame you, but the script format is way too confusing for most people. Your spelling and grammar needs lots of improvement and the characters are totally ooc; which means out of character, which, put simply, means they aren't acting or speaking the way they do on the show. It's like they aren't Buffy and Spike, they're imposters, or something. Along with those distracting things, the dialogue is very bland and way too precise. (for example: "I do not think we were friends, oh yes, I hated her she was a slut") ppl don't actually speak in that way, its kinda creepy, lol. Anyway, I won't tell you not to write anymore because I'm a writer, and though my writing is exceptional and way more advanced than your own, I wouldn't quit doing what I love just because others didn't like my story. I'm just saying, unless you get someone to edit your work, or learn how to edit your own work, and learn the character's personalities, you're not going to get many readers. Good luck and congrats for going as far as you have with this story. Peace.
| Guest 8/15/12 . chapter 27
i liked your story, but the script style of writing was distracting.
| MourningGlorie 8/8/12 . chapter 1
it's good, but the script-style is kinda distracting. try writing it first or third person point of view. keep up the good work.
| vixiethefox 6/4/12 . chapter 5
Hi..i am really enjoying your concept for this story, however I am noticing some grammatical issues that are causing me to reread paragraphs..do u have a beta..if not I am willing to assist u with this story..
| Embers and Flame 5/25/12 . chapter 19
Definately yay! And practically in front of Angel too... Too funny.
| Dazzie 5/13/12 . chapter 5
Ars? It is spelt arse! With an e. sorry, but its annoying me :)
| Spike's real lover 5/2/12 . chapter 15
Really enjoying the story. Can't wait for an update! I really like this. P.S. Spuffy? Maybe more Riley bashing? (As in someone bashing him over the head with blunt instruments.)
| SB4ever 2/13/12 . chapter 5
I lov ur story keep writing
| Lola 2/13/12 . chapter 1
I'm sorry to say this but I couldn't even get through the first chapter. Your actually writing seems to be decent from what I've read, but because you have everything in script format (e.g. Buffy: I'll explain... , Spike: No!) it ruins any potential flow of the story, and can be kind of irritating to read.