|Reviews for The Long Road Home|
| sonya c 3/15/12 . chapter 31
This has been a harrowing trip for M&K and me, lol. Great job at keeping the drama and tension from faltering, I really have enjoyed the journey!
| lostcowgirl 3/9/12 . chapter 28
You sure put our friends in a heap o trouble. Can't wait to find out what Magnus' idea is.
| mahc 3/8/12 . chapter 28
Surely Magnus and Matt can handle eight little Indians...if Matt stays conscious that long!
| lilyjack00 3/8/12 . chapter 28
Woo! Cliffhangers...I love 'em and I hate 'em. Keep writing!
| sonya c 3/8/12 . chapter 27
Still loving this story! Can't wait to read more.
| lostcowgirl 3/6/12 . chapter 26
Thanks for 2 more great chapters. Kitty knows Matt too well. She can always tell when he's worried. Perhaps when they meet the Indians either Magnus or Matt will know their chief. Maybe both of them will know him. I'll just have to wait and see how you decide to play things out. At least they're moving towards home again.
| lostcowgirl 3/4/12 . chapter 24
Glad that Kitty's on the mend.
I don't know if I mentioned this before in a review, but in this particular story you seem to be recapping more than necessary from one chapter to the next. I have to read several paragraphs before I'm sure it's the first of the new chapters you've posted.
Still, great story telling. You're doing a fine job of keeping up the suspense.
| mahc 3/4/12 . chapter 24
Glad Kitty is doing better, glad Magnus is there to help, and really glad Matt is in charge. I'm expecting more conflict, of course!
| lostcowgirl 2/29/12 . chapter 22
I wasn't surprised that Magnus found them, but was surprised he brought everything the doctor ordered or as close to it as he could.
| sonya c 2/28/12 . chapter 22
Whew, glad they have some help...they sure need it! Can't wait to see what happens next :)
| lostcowgirl 2/25/12 . chapter 20
Oh the suspense. Are the tracks by the cave from Magnus or from Indians? I guess I'll just have to wait to find out.
| sonya c 2/24/12 . chapter 20
Holding my breath here...
| MoonstoneMaiden 2/24/12 . chapter 19
Can't wait to see what happens! Bringing Magnus back was a terrific move. I always thought he was such an interseting character.
| lilyjack00 2/17/12 . chapter 17
Law...don't leave me hangin', sister!
| sonya c 2/13/12 . chapter 14
Hmm, curious to see where this twist takes us.