It's really clever how you're using authors' stories!

I love how you make the boys seem like brothers! In so many fanfics, they seem like hyper boys who are friends only because of Moony's furry problem. Great job!

Haha that was really cute! I really like the way you wove it in to your story and your marauders are really in character :) thank you!

I love the thought of Remus reading fanfiction and telling the other Marauders about it. Fantastic.

Also, I'll have to check out the stories mentioned in here. They all sound really interesting!