|Reviews for The Veil|
| Twilovingmama 5/8/13 . chapter 15
Wow.. What a beautiful and sad ending. I am a little confused. Is Edward mortal or immortal? I think that it was always Bella's destiny to die and Edward came for her. Does he follow her? Can we have an epilogue? PLEASE!
| muffinmom 5/8/13 . chapter 15
This chapter left me confused. Wasn’t Edward a vampire (or at least I thought this was implied) – and if so how’d he end up being in an accident? IS she planning on donating organs – but wasn’t she sick already and if so wouldn’t that preclude the donation? And how would she or Edward know about the potential receiver, isn’t that kind of stuff kept confidential?
Based on your a/n it sounds like this story is done- which confuses me b/c the end feels incomplete, I assume its left vague on purpose. I can see where this story served you as a sounding board for your thoughts on mortality, tbh it was fascinating to read. I have enjoyed reading your beautiful writing, thx for sharing.
| alc219 5/8/13 . chapter 15
Sad, but wonderful story! x
| Deanimal1286 5/8/13 . chapter 15
Oh my gosh...this one had me hooked from the start...I don't really read Edward/Bella anymore but this was sooo beautiful ...I kinda hope for an epilogue but not sure what Edward ended up deciding !
| 2old4fanfic 5/8/13 . chapter 15
This is one of those things that is really well done, but horrific at the same time. This week was the tenth anniversary of my friend who dropped dead at age 41. She was such a wonderful person and had so much to give. I like the thought of the veil being lifted at the end.
| silton 5/8/13 . chapter 15
Beautiful...thanks for sharing.
| flojo03 5/8/13 . chapter 15
wow reading your words evoked so many emotions and this story has once again blown me away and had me reaching for the tissues. I hope this has helped you with your heart breaking work that you do, it is great to see your "face" back again
| TwistStix 5/8/13 . chapter 15
I'm not going to claim I understood everything that happened in this story and I guess that since it was such a personal journey for you maybe I wasn't meant to. However, that didn't detract from how much I enjoyed the journey with you so thank you for a beautifully written and thought provoking piece (or should I say peace) ;)
| H. Story 5/8/13 . chapter 15
I've been totally captivated by this story for the past couple hours and have not reviewed once. I started reading the first chapters as you posted them and soon realized I should wait until the story was complete. SO glad I did.
Your storytelling evoked such a calmness and symmetry whithin life's most incomprehensive realities. And like those great baffling mysteries, one must find a peace within the great contemplation. That is what you seemed to pen down in my mind- and did it with grace and respect for all aspects of the human condition (frustration, love, hurt fear, etc- it was all there). Death is with us even as we live... I could just go on and on with the thoughts this story has brought to mind. Thank you for writing and sharing! I will be looking forward to more of your work.
| flojo03 5/7/13 . chapter 14
she is realing that she wants to be with him forever too
| flojo03 5/7/13 . chapter 13
| flojo03 5/7/13 . chapter 12
he wants to keep her forever...
| flojo03 5/7/13 . chapter 11
| flojo03 5/7/13 . chapter 10
things are slowly falling into place for me...
| flojo03 5/7/13 . chapter 9
wow turn in events here