This chapter is the epitome of everything that is right with your writing. You written before that you two strive for making read like reality and boy do you capture that. Best favorite part: Jason freaking out. IMO: best part that's most likely true to life: Elise thoughts bout who she wants to be. Thanks you and please for the love of god, keep writing. Ps. Dustin was awesome too.

Great chapter. The morning after with Jason & Cassie was so good and I could actually picture this in my head. I hope that you'll be writing a romantic relationship between the two of them as I love the two of them together. The relationship between Jason & Cassie reminds me of the relationship between Clark & Lois on 'Smallville' and the Jason & Elise relationship reminds me of the Clark/Lana relationship on 'Smallville'. Except that their relationship is a lot less dysfunctional & I like Elise more than I've ever liked Lana.

It's great to see Dustin back in Kala's life and to see the friendship between Sebastian & Kala.

Elise's POV! Nice, thank you!

Good job with Ben and Clark. Ben's never had any doubts? really?

Cassie and Jason? Why not... I guess this kind of things do happen! By the way, will he ever fly? I feel like I am watching SV all over again, waiting for Tom to take his first flight...

Kala and Sebast? I do love the dynamic but don't pull a Will and Grace on us... please!

Thank you again for this amazing work!

I like Cassie for JK, more than Elise.

There is something missing here, Lois comforting her husband after the lost of his mother.

You make me cry, really you do, this was beautiful, i love Bens memories and Clarks reflections, You do a wonderful job as always.

Yet another great chapter from this story! Jason is too adorable for words, I just love him so much. And Cassie is completely right, he is the ultimate good guy.

I feel like I'VE just been to Martha's funeral . . .

That was beautifully handled.

Lex and Ra's cooperating? Now THAT'S scary.

Great chapter. It was really sad and actually made me tear up. The whole chapter was very moving.

Martha... And I thought it was going to be Ben for a minutes. Martha...

I find I'm not surprised that you planned this in advance. Any future/fic must include Martha's death if it gets far enough into the future. I suppose if you get far enough out there, all the original characters must die.

I thought you handled the whole matter with grace, sensitivity, and exquisite language.

Thank you.

Shawn

I'm glad you warned me about the tears. It helped me focus on the story, not the loss I would be feeling. :) I also think it's funny and cool that Ben found out. I realize he knows something, but please make sure to have everyone explain the whole something after the extra people are gone from the funeral. Or maybe just have Clark and Ben discuss it after everyone else has had to go back to work.

You were right: I cried like a baby when Clark first went there and realized the truth. I always love Martha Kent and your version of Martha made the character justice. Thank you and enjoy the vacation!

I know I have been warned but I am crying like a baby. I knew when I read your warning that we will lost her today but it didn't help with the grief. See, this is your talent as a writers... I am crying over the death of a fictional character and I don't even to think of her as a fictional character!

You did a great job with this chapter.

I loved this chapter... Jason and Kala are great and so grown up! I can't believe it's been only three years since the last Luthor attack! Will we get to read Elise's POV? I would love to know how she feels about her relationship with Jason and the whole family!

Did I mention I love Sebast? He is so close to Kala and he doesn't even doubt her, if only he knew! Or I guess it wouldn't even matter.

And the last part? So sweet to see them together!

Thank you for this wonderful world!

Where can i buy a Sebastiáno? he is adorable i love him, that scene was Amazing.

Oh Bruce, let the League Help you!