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Rose1948 9/7/11 . chapter 1
Holy Crap! Now THAT was a bit unexpected! ::blinks::
GeorgeTobor 1/24/10 . chapter 1
I'm so sorry, THIS IS INCOMPLETE! Genma seems to have stolen some child from his mother because the original Ranma died. THE PANDA NEED TO PAY! Only then can the story be complete. I suggest Neko-ken training with man-eating tigers after the weakness moxibustion is used on him.
MomochiNaruto 4/25/09 . chapter 1
This one is weird, but interesting. It is hard to imagine a bunch of housecat types killing even a 5 year old though.
anon 11/24/08 . chapter 1
I must admit to some confusion as to just where Genma is getting these extra Ranmas. Otherwise, a very excellent fic.
Tildessmoo 8/23/06 . chapter 1
Um... Wow. Definitely an unforseen conclusion. No wonder he treats Ranma more like property than his son...
Erentei Lord of Insanity 2/11/05 . chapter 1
Freeky. GENMA BAKA OYAJI!

(genma beaten up by every character I've ever created)

Genma: Oog.

All characters: DIEDIEDIEDIEDIE(start beating up genma again)

Genma's mind snaps.

(genma puts on tutu as panda)

Genma:Hello godzilla, would you like some tea?

Superintelligent guinea pig:...

Genma: Hello superintelligent guinea pig, would you like some biscuits or beggan strips?

Godzilla: Roar!

Genma: Oh wait, beggan strips!(puts on garter and starts dancing to She's A Brick House)

Godzilla: gets a nosebleed

Superintelligent guinea pig: screams and runs at top speed in opposite direction.
Phil 9/16/04 . chapter 1
I've admitted not liking Genma, but I can't see him just getting another Ranma and continuing the Catfist..

But what if it was not only necessary, but normal?

1. Success as a thief implies practice, and what better reason than all the Ranmas Genma couldn't steal back from those he sold his son too?

2. Training trip again because the birthmark was wearing off. A few training bruises could really come in handy!

3. As the Ranma's got older you'd need something more than intimidation and indoctrination to keep the brat from asking 'where is my real father?' Thus Genma is no longer a martial artist too stupid to read all of the manual, he's now counting on the insanity! Ranma will come out of it without all those annoying memory ties to another family.

4. Genma can find the best methods to craft a 'mostly' sane Ranma after a few practice runs go bad? Perhaps he can look on this as a 'rite of passage.' After all, only the best Lion Cub should get the chance to become Ranma! (And once one did survive, he would sure to live through the rest of Genma's insane ideas?)

5. And (shudder) wouldn't it just fit into the Ranmaverse if Konatsu had this annoying birthmark it was just so hard to cover over with makeup?
goku90504 8/10/04 . chapter 1
evil genma to the extream
Neo 8/4/04 . chapter 1
This was just plain cruel and hilarious. -snickers-
Tangent 7/29/04 . chapter 1
Ack! A black humor story!

I may just ask you for permission to continue a story along these line with this one as the basis. Very intriging, but very very bad news for Genma...

Tangent
Sorted 7/15/04 . chapter 1
Frightenly, I can see Genma doing something like that.
huge 7/16/02 . chapter 1
Genma is sooooo dead.
Stephen 5/15/02 . chapter 1
Ouch...Scary..You've found a way to make Genma really evil.

As for a title, try "Torn", or Torn Asunder", both of which deals with Ranma's feelings on the matter of being the first surviving 'Ranma' of the Neko-ken and what must have happened to the other 'Ranmas'.

Ick, still got chills from this one.
E.B.E 5/15/02 . chapter 1
This is a good start, I hope you go into more detail in any other chapters. And as far as a sugestion for a title this is one of my favorite phrases in Japanese. Kisama! Baka yamaro, omea o korosu! translation You fu**ing bastard. You fool, I will kill you!
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