Great chapter!

Outstanding. Wildly out of character in the articulate Ranma, but in the very best traditions of Fanfiction.

I really enjoyed this read and look forward to picking up some more of your works

Hamleranma :)
It was fun. Good, that it hadn't finished like Hamlet ;)

I enjoyed this story...I don't think it was particularly in character, but in the end it was a very well written story with a unique concept that I've never seen before in a Ranma fanfiction. Thank you for writing it.

I've just now, on rereading, noted something.

..The SAINT CHUCK school? Bananas? Would this, perhaps, relate to Monkey Island?

good story, byes

The banter was fun to read and had that biting honesty or true wit.
I enjoyed this

Great, great story. You had Ranma acting like one of my friends, Stephan. Really, it was uncanny. (he's not insane, he just likes to act it a lot... so do I, but that's beside the point...) A great story with a great plot that was well written. It's hard to find a good story like this while wading through a sea of crap and same-old-same-old stories. I'll admit, I may not be the most original guy and my writing skills my be sub-par (which is actually why I haven't updated in forever... working on my writing skills) but I do think I'm better than a lot of writers out there. Still, a great story with a unique concept, a rare feat in this time. YES! LIGHT ARROW SHOT STRAIGHT THROUGH GANONDORF... ahem, sorry. Watching the pc play brawl for a while. Anyway, good job.

Good story. I am not good at critiquing them though.

This is such an old fic, but I just had to review. I love how much work you probably put into this fic, probably researching a bit into the law to figure out what would be charged against these characters.

My only problem is that everyone's vocabulary and speech were upgraded way beyond their level, most notably Ranma and Shampoo. In the original, Shampoo could barely speak Japanese and Ranma's not much of a Shakespeare himself. This entire fic probably would never happen simply because at Ranma's intelligence and maturity level he can't even begin to play his role as an insane man. Perhaps with the aid of a lawyer he can, but not for long.

Still, it was a very enjoyable read. Thank you for your hard work!

Well Done!
Mike

You know, this story just wouldn't be the same if Ranma didn't speak in polysyllabic sentences. There's no way he could express these concepts while speaking like a low-brow Homer Simpson.

I'm glad you brought the law into this. It's about time somebody did.

Interesting story. thanks,
Mike

This is definately top-tier work. The madness scenes were most assuredly my favorites.

The only real ways to improve I could mention would be to check your punctuation which was mostly limited to misplaced quotations marks.

I must say, I have a great desire to read other pieces of your writing as 'An Overlooked World' and 'Constructing Misanthrope' were also excellent stories.

~Ky

GODS I LOVE IT! The first conversation at breakfast was one of the funniest things I've ever read. i'm a little worried for myself that most everything he says makes perfect sense...

Hi!

I've read your story, and i thinks it was really funny, but at last was a little depressive, i don't know... the end part was really not that conclussive, but i liked it nevertheless... i'm looking to read your other stories