Ohhhh interesting. Cute ending.

I love it. 'Twas Magnificent! I would love if you would make this into a Multi-chap fic! I'm sorry I didn't know anything abot the contest on DeviantArt but this was simply great i loved it. Although I didn't cry my heart hurt a bit a certain points, and it really got to me. I really do hope you make this into a multi-chap fic I'm looking forward to seeing more of this.

OMG OMG :3 short but amazingly great I love the plot xD

I dont see how it came last, its just amazing and i would think that i could be a multi-chaptered story

:D This is awesome! It combines two of my favorite things; Emilie Autumn and KuroFai! :3

How did this come in last place! It's brilliant -this is coming from someone who likes the Arthurian Legends though. I liked this a lot better than 'The Mulberry Tree' because they both lived (I like death fics, but only if one of them dies cause I'm twisted like that). I love your writing style.

If this ends up being a multichapter fic then I'd love it; if it doesn't then that's okay too.

loved it. would very much love to see more.

I for one LOVE this story and would be very happy to see more chapters on this. Poor Fai-damsel he really did need his Kuro-hero.