How sad. Well done, yet sad.

Ranma is dead. Sometimes I think the only way out of the mess that Takahashi put him in is death. His or lots of other peoples death. The twist at the end was good. But I'm not fond of fics that have Ranma die unless he is reborn somehow. Still it is a decent oneshot short.

I like this. At first you think that Ranma is mourning Akane, but he's actually a ghost mourning himself.

There is something I'm curious about though. Not necessarily in this story, but as a ghost in general. Would Ranma be male, female, or still able to change between the two?

Giving you props. Not many authors can do a oneshot this short and get away with it. This is a very nice indeed. The twist totally caught me off guard too.

Cool. You are a very good writer

whoa. that is so eerily sad and emotional. it sent shivers up my spine.

Oooh, very good. Short yet pretty powerful.

Interesting. Took me a while to figure out that Ranma is a ghost haunting the dojo; I kept on thinking that you meant "if Happosai's last bomb killed me, instead of Akane", until the story clicked.

Well, you certainly succeeded! I've never seen this style before but I love it! If you don't plan on writing more for this one, I hope you write more stories soon!

Sorry, last line blows the entire impact of the story.

How sad! Though it seems slightly mean of him to wish that.