Wow hahahahah in every chapter Iaught so hard! Lmfao!

" Dragon crop" lol hahaha

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH LOL

"GET THAT FUCKING SQUIRRL!" LOL HAHAHAH I got to say that's going to make me luagh all day hahahah wow

"GET THAT FUCKING SQUIRRL!" XD

Ok. Please. Take your time. You're always in my favorites. So your story will always pop up when you update.

thaz sad but thanz for the notice we all will be waiting

nice job my love, your getting better with time, keep up the good work! Love U Nick

Its really awesome but u have to make the chapters longer there too short but it's great

Well. This was good. Please continue.

wow this is pretty good, i wonder what will happen next...?

Omg that was awesome but u have to make it a little more longer and here r sone of my ideas

-zoeys dad tells her who her real mother is

- zoey completes the change

- zoey and Kalona get marride

- and I'm now out of ideas and by the way u have to think of all the detail for what ever u use and the one with zoey making the change make it after she finds out about her mom or u can ignore my ideas so please please update soon and don't make me wait more then a day

Isn't this the same chapter as last time

Ahh! Parents are dead. What are they going to do? Neferet is gettin. Everyone on her side! Ah. Please continue

Hmm. Nyxs gift or neferet's gift? Can't wait to read more

i love this book keep writing every day i check to c if u have written a new chapter i am a fan

Uh oh. Well that was bad timing. Anyway. So glad summer has finally come. Hallelujah! I am going to camp right before school ends so. Yeah I'll be busy too. Have fun!

I love love love this fanfiction you have have to up up update. I really love how you have

Zoey in love with Kalona I never saw that coming and I never thought I'd fall in love this fanfiction. So please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please pleaseplease please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update this fanfiction because if you don't I'll go crazy or Die or GO INSANE because I really really really want to know what happens next. So please please please update soon or u know what might happen