PLEASSEEEEEEEEE finish this story! I'm dying!

Please finish it soon! I'm hanging on the edge of my seat!

One of the best fanfictions I've read, please update soon it's getting good... :)

Hi! I'm really curious to know the end! It's a really good story! :D hope you can publish the last chapters

I think this story line is really great. The conversations make sense with the characters and the descriptions are very nice also. Keep it up!

Ok, so, i'll do a longer review later when I am done with what you have written, but this is really annoying me. John Bob is spelt Jean Bob. Ok, back to reading. Nice job so far!

Awesome! Great Update speed :D I'm really excited to see where you'll take this!

I'm waiting, slowly waiting for the light to go off and for Derek to have an epiphany and realize that is not his Odette, or the real one anyways. And judging by the way this is going I'm going to be waiting along time for that to happen, probably as long as the real Odette is waiting now. I only wish this chapter was a bit longer so we can find out more, but still a great chapter none the less. Please don't leave me waiting until the third night for Derek to barely realize something is off, can he figure it out on the next chapter :) Great story and I hope the suspense only builds up.

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And so history repeats it's self. Veronica turns Odette into a swan, ultimatum and plan all laid out, and she is going to confuse Derek into thinking she is Odette. None of these villains have a sense of originality, do they. I just hope that Derek and Odette both due their part in finding each other and helping stop this maniac from A. Killing Odette, B. Getting the Kingdom with the use of the Forbidden Arts. or C. Derek barely comes through and once again has to use magic to get Odette back. Great detail in the chapter though :)

Very good chapter! Poor Odette, Derek best be able to see through Veronica's disguise!

Update soon! Thanks for writing.

Awesome! Can't wait for another chapter! :D

Has Odette learned nothing from her past experiences with the Forbidden Arts? 1. Never leave the room with a nagging suspicion about something 2. Derek hiding something from you leads to a fight, which leads to separation, which concludes with kidnapping and welcoming a new villain. 3. Keep your friends close, and your enemies closer. Great chapter, so much suspense about what that demon spawn Veronica will do next. If it has anything involving turning Odette into a swan or killing her, then she needs to apply for a frequent victims membership program :)

Odette is princess for god sake, that is surely not the best dress she has in her wardrobe. Odette needs to show this little wannabe how a real princess does it. Slightly putting her back in her place, needs to lead to some divine intervention. No more of this we'll be friends after we work it out stuff. Yes, Odette, work it out, after you throw her the heck out of your kingdom. You can mail her letters from her prison cell, in Chuten-Chuten-Doodang. And Derek needs to keep his hands where I can see them. I'm waiting for Odette to make Veronica her own personal punching bag. Great chapter, waiting to get front row seats to this boxing match :)

This Veronica is really starting to rub me the wrong way. If I was Odette, I would slap Derek silly, make him remember that he is her husband, not Veronica's. Then listen to that nagging little voice in my head that is saying wait a minute, DANGER. Great chapter, and I love where it is going :)