| Reviews for Welcome, Oliver, to HELL! |
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theunhappytwins 4/20/13 . chapter 1What about Mayu? Oh, I'd love to see Olly-chan meet her. |
skygirlolive 12/22/12 . chapter 1This is awesome! What happened to SeeU? Did Gakupo "accidentally" miss the dummy he was practicing using katana with? |
CloverRin 8/24/12 . chapter 1lawlz again XDDD more iroha x oliver! But this time, not just chatting XD |
oliver neru 8/22/12 . chapter 1 " mommy im going to nerus room! " oliver siad to his mom sweet ann " well ok .. have a good time in nerus room! " olivers mom said " NERU NERU NERU NERU NERU NERU NERU NERU NERU NERU NERU NERU NERU NERU NERU NERU NERU NERU NERU NERU NERU!" oliver said '' yes ollie? " neru said " can we go to the beach? " oliver asked " at 5:00 in the morning, all right ollie lets go!" neru said, " ok mom were going to the beach ok?" " ok... but be carefull, and dont forget to carry sun block when the sun rises!" said neru and olivers mom " WHERE DO YOU THINK YOUR GOING? " asked rin and len the twins, " the beach at 5:00 in the mroning! " said oliver " rin and len go to bed now now NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW dont let be spank your buts rin and len well i dont mean it well come to bed! " said there dad kaito " all right daddy were coming " said len " good night twins!" said neru " bye bye!" said rin and len said sadly as they went to bed. as they went to the beach it was all most son rise , and the life gard was there up and early! " hello fello travelers! " said the life gard " hello Miss. miku life gard!" said oliver happyly , " lets put on sun screen ollie! " said neru " ok! " as they put on there sun screen they saw rin and len and there dad and mom miki. " RIN LEN OVA HERE! said oliver exsightedly " MIREAM PUT ON SOME SUN SCREEN YOUR GETTING A SUN BURN! " said miream's dad leaon, every single person came to the beach even oliver and mom and dad came too when it was time to go at 12:00 in the noon neru said " oh no its time to go mom and dad and ollie!" " oh ya!" said dad " well bye bye! " said rin and len! " bye friends!" said miku " bye Miss. miku hatsune" said dad as they reached home oliver was asleep " AWW hes so cute when hes asleep! " said Seeu " um thanks...? " " NP!" said Seeu as they all settle down to eat lunch they all lived happyly ever after FIN |
EK12 5/13/12 . chapter 1Erm, fix her leg? And Wants to find a way to make you have more personalities |
MeAndMyReflection 1/30/12 . chapter 1Will this story continues? I can't wait to read it again! |
Iluvian Melody 1/30/12 . chapter 1... ... ... ... ... You've certainly created an interesting Vocaloid world, my friend. And are you sure your eyes aren't red, yellow, or orange 24/7...? And in case it does't appear as it should the first line is 3 dots, 2nd is six, 3rd is nine, fourth is twelve, fifth is as long as I felt like it. |
Inside Out Musica 1/29/12 . chapter 1*laughs uncontrollably* I'm sorry for the extremeness, but this was so funny! Even if this was only an attempt, still, good job! Hah, the introducing was only a lie. Too bad for you Ollie, you had to go through that. But d'aww! The adorable end of Oliver and Iroha! Whee! Aweshumeness. :DD |