|Reviews for Welcome, Oliver, to HELL!|
| theunhappytwins 4/20/13 . chapter 1
What about Mayu? Oh, I'd love to see Olly-chan meet her.
| skygirlolive 12/22/12 . chapter 1
This is awesome! What happened to SeeU? Did Gakupo "accidentally" miss the dummy he was practicing using katana with?
| CloverRin 8/24/12 . chapter 1
lawlz again XDDD
more iroha x oliver! But this time, not just chatting XD
| oliver neru 8/22/12 . chapter 1
" mommy im going to nerus room! "
oliver siad to his mom sweet ann
" well ok .. have a good time in nerus room! "
olivers mom said
" NERU NERU NERU NERU NERU NERU NERU NERU NERU NERU NERU NERU NERU NERU NERU NERU NERU NERU NERU NERU NERU!"
'' yes ollie? " neru said
" can we go to the beach? " oliver asked
" at 5:00 in the morning, all right ollie lets go!"
" ok mom were going to the beach ok?"
" ok... but be carefull, and dont forget to carry sun block when the sun rises!"
said neru and olivers mom " WHERE DO YOU THINK YOUR GOING? "
asked rin and len the twins,
" the beach at 5:00 in the mroning! "
said oliver " rin and len go to bed now now NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW
dont let be spank your buts rin and len well i dont mean it well come to bed! " said there dad kaito
" all right daddy were coming " said len " good night twins!" said neru
" bye bye!" said rin and len said sadly as they went to bed.
as they went to the beach it was all most son rise , and the life gard was there up and early!
" hello fello travelers! " said the life gard " hello Miss. miku life gard!"
said oliver happyly , " lets put on sun screen ollie! " said neru
" ok! "
as they put on there sun screen they saw rin and len and there dad and mom
" RIN LEN OVA HERE! said oliver exsightedly
" MIREAM PUT ON SOME SUN SCREEN YOUR GETTING A SUN BURN! " said miream's
every single person came to the beach even oliver and mom and dad came too
when it was time to go at 12:00 in the noon neru said " oh no its time to go mom and dad and ollie!"
" oh ya!" said dad
" well bye bye! " said rin and len!
" bye friends!" said miku
" bye Miss. miku hatsune"
as they reached home oliver was asleep
" AWW hes so cute when hes asleep! "
" um thanks...? "
" NP!" said Seeu
as they all settle down to eat lunch
they all lived happyly ever after
| EK12 5/13/12 . chapter 1
Erm, fix her leg? And Wants to find a way to make you have more personalities
| MeAndMyReflection 1/30/12 . chapter 1
Will this story continues? I can't wait to read it again!
| Iluvian Melody 1/30/12 . chapter 1
... You've certainly created an interesting Vocaloid world, my friend. And are you sure your eyes aren't red, yellow, or orange 24/7...?
And in case it does't appear as it should the first line is 3 dots, 2nd is six, 3rd is nine, fourth is twelve, fifth is as long as I felt like it.
| Inside Out Musica 1/29/12 . chapter 1
*laughs uncontrollably* I'm sorry for the extremeness, but this was so funny! Even if this was only an attempt, still, good job!
Hah, the introducing was only a lie. Too bad for you Ollie, you had to go through that.
But d'aww! The adorable end of Oliver and Iroha! Whee!