 Angelfish369 4/2/10 . chapter 1oh wow...that was so incredibly sad... |
 Starbat 8/19/06 . chapter 1HAH! That story was so deliciously tragic. Good job! |
 Mabby 4/28/05 . chapter 1 How have I not seen this fic until now is beyond me.. but man, its so sad.. poor Bob :*( very well written tho, good job |
 kyria777 12/18/04 . chapter 1NO. Okay, that was way too sad for me...and I don't even LIKE Dot. T_T;; man...T_T but thanks for including Hex for Bob to cry with. *sniff* issobooteeful. |
 Nexus Prime 3/19/03 . chapter 1That was excellent. Sad, but excellent. |
 Brenren 5/16/02 . chapter 1You made me cry. Do you know how hard it is to really get me to cry? I cried like a baby. That was so sad Ava. Very well written though, you deserve a cookie for that. :) |
 Fidget 5/16/02 . chapter 1That was well-written and very sad. I have to say, though, I had just a small bit of trouble picturing the characters in that situation. I don't know why, maybe it's just me. I mean, it works, but somehow...Anyway, I did like it very much and the ending was heart-wrenching. |
 Leivi 5/16/02 . chapter 1OH MY GOD! AVA no, how could you do this to me? Im sitting here in a public place for crying out loud. People are looking at me like Im insane. This is the first time Ive EVER cried at a fic and I have to do it in an internet cafe. Seriously sad! And seriously good! Way to clear the writers block, now for the sake of my reputation as a hard hearted soul please dont make me cry again lol. |
 Raquel aka white crow 5/15/02 . chapter 1 Dude.. So sad... but.. good...*tear* |
 trisanamcgraw 5/15/02 . chapter 1This deserves another review (I already put one up on Mayhem's Board). There were parts I could predict would happen, but the emotion really rings true, and it really describes the situation perfectly. |