oh no! wait what plan aw who cares good story _

oh my poor zabel :( glad he got his revenge on that d-bag! :3

Good beginning. I enjoy in and the first chapter. Anyway Meh... Meh...Meh...

I live my life meh, so. Yeah its good 7 out of ten. 17 out of 20.

This story really flows in my opinion. I like it. Turtles smell funny.

This is quite an interesting story, I hope that you finish the next part soon. I look forward to it. I personally don't write but I love reading good stories. This,on a scale of 1-10, I give it an 8.5 so far... Keep it up, and don't be one of those assholes who only rights a prologue or on chapter. That is the so gay. I hope you do continue,I like it.