|Reviews for Project|
| Holden Caulfield 1/25/13 . chapter 1
I admire the way you try and write Ararararagi, but you should have him describe more things. He once spanned several pages just looking at panties for a second. That tiny speck of description of him getting ready to into Senjougahara's house, you could expand on that for pages. Describe the building as if it is trying to become a character. If you want to write fanfiction Nisioisin's work. You should learn to make vivid images in your work.
| Guest 7/12/12 . chapter 1
haha poor boyfriend XD
| XxTearsOfCrimsonxX 2/26/12 . chapter 1
The ending wasn't that bad.
In honest truth, I laughed aloud in the middle of my English class when I read the last few lines. O