I thought that this was very interesting. I was sad it ended so suddenly. Keep going and please update.

I said I was going to review, didn't I? :D

So...to review your story...

To tell you the truth, your story is actually one of the most well put fics I've read in a long time. I'm serious. People put a load of stories online and they usually aren't the greatest, but I will say that yours is EXCEPTIONAL!

And your dialogue was perfect and (surprisingly) in character. If anyone should have bad dialogue, it's myself. I wrote many of my stories back in 8th grade and I was HORRIBLE at writing. I don't erase them because I sometimes re-read it again to compare it to my current writing. So yeah... your dialogue is fine :D

Most of all, PLEASE don't erase this! It's a good piece of writing gone to waste of you do. Even if you think the plot isn't interesting at all, keep it up. People will apprechiate it sooner or later :D