...So it took ya four years to finally finish the story. Oh well, I can't complain, at least you finally finished it.

i read this before on sum other site and i think its amazing! Good job

I read this story on and I was nearly crying, seriously I was! It is such a brilliant story! the best by far!

For a first fic, this was very well thought out and you managed to capture Ryoko's emotions to a T. Future chapters should be interesting.