Another amazing chapter. Bloom was still so hesitant to believe what Patrine was telling her, that she was Layla but she eventually listened to everything. It is so nice to see what could happen in the future even though it is such a dark future. I felt so bad for Kylar and Galatea when they were killed. The talk that Helia and Flora had was just what the nature fairy needed to realize what she needed to do, she needs to forgive Bloom and it still might be hard for her to do that with how she is feeling. It was nice to see her apologize to Stella and Sky. Those two words that Bloom listened to coming from Layla's lips must have shocked her, but when she heard what happened with the others that must have just felt like a large crushing weight fell on top of her. First you have Helia being captured and then Stella and Brandon missing in action, followed by Flora leaving the note. What must have been the largest weight to hit her must have been the note that Miele had sent about the twins that Flora had. I am happy that group A found Anne and I can't wait to see what happens next. I can't wait to find out who it was that Sky heard after falling down below where he was. And what had happened to Musa and the others before Layla ended up on Doomsday. I can't wait to see how the Layla from the futures plan plays out, is she going to succeed at what she is trying to do or will she fail? Overall this was a excellent chapter and I look forward to the next chapter.

Hey you good at adding the storie... It's just like the coming storie of winx season 5(but not at bloom dead)... And Happy Easter

Omg. Poor Winx! This chapter was the best one in my opinion. All I can say is WOW! Update soon! ;) :)

wow...

4) Bloom and Petrine/Laylas conversation. Okay, its been a mess at school, too many homeworks must be done, so I'm late for reviewing. Flora's well, being a total JERK, really! And Sky too. And I'm still confused, Layla is Petrine? Or Petrine has fooled Bloom to believe that she's Layla? Okay, I just can't wait for the next chapter, this chapter is full of surprises, LOVED IT! And now, I'll say, I HATE FLORA! Just because Bloom can't help heal Helia, doesn't means that she doesn't care! Okay, update soon :D

P.S. Still confused? :/

omg i did not see that coming! Petrine is Layla! can't wait to read the explanation in the next chapter! and i vote for Bloom Petrine conversation.

Another wonderful addition to the story. I was happy for Layla when Anne showed up but felt bad for her condition. Kyler must have felt horriable when he saw what his sister looked like when she was found. Nabu's talk with Layla after she was found was something that she needed. Sucks that they have to wait so long for them to get off of the planet. Sky must have been beyond shocked when he woke up to find Bloom missing, and Flora not really caring was an interesting addition. Kylar wanted to tear Riven apart after he finds his sister on day and she is gone the next under the specialists watch. With what happened to Bloom at the end of the chapter leaves it on a massive cliffhanger, I can't wait to see what happens with the story that Patrine has to tell her. I also can't wait to find out what happened with Anne.

Nice chapter :)

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It's me Rocky I got an account! Anyway Im sooooo confused, so is Layla in two places at once or something. IDK. Im sure you'll explain it in the other chapter. Love your story. Update soon!

4 and i'm slightly confused

Love it!

Loved it! Especially the part that Layla and Kylar's fighting. Hope the next chapter won't be long. Well, let's just see what happens. But I'll always wait!

Another great chapter, Galatea must have felt like her whole world was over until Derrick woke up. To turn and see her father and him telling her that she should never feel alone was wonderful. Kylar overcoming his anger was a perfect way to wake up. To admit to himself that fighting was not the only way must have been hard for him. Musa I loved the single tear showing that Riven still loved her and she was able to save him from Darcy was perfect. To find out that Stella was only dreaming about a play was funny and that Musa had been playing a joke on her was just right. Layla being able to free Anne from Valtor's symbol must have made her feel better, I felt bad for Anne when she thought that Layla would never forgive her for what she had done, but was happy to see that she did. Tecna turning on the Trix must have surpriesed them but was perfect, funny that Timmy said that she looked good in black. I love that Riven was able to break free from Darcy and was able to save Musa. Nabu was right Layla would never want to see him become a person like the shadow Nabu. I laughed at what happened when Brandon fially found Stella, her calling out for help to zip up a dress would be something that she would do. It must have been hard for Sky to watch everything happening to him but I was very happy when he dropped the sword insted of killing Bloom. Timmy and Tecna was just so cute it felt just right. Bloom taking the hits from Dark Bloom to walk up to her must have shocked the dark fairy, but what was the biggest surprise for her was the fact that Bloom forgave her.

I loved that Riven wanted to go after the gargoyle but Sky was right to stop him, especially with them having to get back to the ship to help out Helia. Flora must have been so releived that he was finally healed. I can't wait to see what the story that Kylar has for why Anne and him left Tides. The four that were there must have been shocked when Anne showed up. This story has just continually gets better as it continues.

I read chapter 10 too. I love you're story poor Anne but also she's using them especially Layla anyway Update Soon