that was really good! please do more chapters! i hate cliffhangers!

damn cliffhangers! Of course I want more! It has Angel, Wesley & Doyle, duh! I'm very intrigued, hun... so go on!

It's an intriguing beginning. My only criticism would be that you need to work on your paragraphing. You change paragraphs with a change of speakers. I would look forward to more.