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Apocalyxtic98 4/17/12 . chapter 9
I'm liking this, even though I'm not a huge fan of slash fiction. But, I'm waiting eagerly for your next chapter!
Alyson1.0 4/5/12 . chapter 9
ohh Gabe and the biscuits! so funny D

looks like Dean is fine. I'm really glad, he is talking in presence of Cas... progress! oh I really hope that he talk some more.

please more Dean/Cas momments?
animegirl03 4/2/12 . chapter 9
good chapter update soon :)
Mist2393 4/2/12 . chapter 9
I liked this chapter, I just wanted to point out that Rugby and American Football aren't actually the same thing. Other than that, I really liked this chapter.
Alyson1.0 3/19/12 . chapter 8
love u writting in third person too. Is more easy to read to me )

oh i think this was pretty bad! poor brothers! when i saw Dean was hurted with that blade... oh I froze! O.O

"Dean comes back – But is he awake or not?" like he's in coma or something? like he will act strange, no emotional? like he is trapped in his memories?

anyway if Dean talks, the merit is for Sam no therapist Cas jajaja sounds funny, i dunno...

pleeeease update ASAP
wibiii 3/18/12 . chapter 8
ohh , i love this. you write very well and i just enjoy the story veryyy much so far :)

can't wait for more!
Verena 3/17/12 . chapter 8
Poor boys!

I hope theyll get better soon...maybe Dean isnt afraid of friendly people so much anymore (well what a sentence... xD)

yeah, continue soon please :)

*gives cookies*
totalizzyness 3/17/12 . chapter 1
I like where you're going with this story; the chapters could be a little longer though (:

Don't feel like you have to write out every minute of every day, if you run out of things you can just skip time, go on to the next day, or week, or whatever.

Also, "traumatisation" isn't a thing, I think what you're going for is Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder, or just Psychological trauma.

Other than that, keep it up (:
Alyson1.0 3/7/12 . chapter 7
i understand that Dean was really worried to see face to face to Cas.. but was a big step that he stayed in the same room and without panic attacks. D

really love the e-mail between Cas and Dean! Dean's necklace scene was pretty cute!

if Dean is going to talk with someone that is not Sam, i think this could happen in a emergency situation. i mean, he is only in the beggining of the therapy. anyway, is time to speak Dean! D go ahead! maybe some words?

please continue ASAP!
Havent.Met.My.Angel.Yet 3/1/12 . chapter 7
aww sweet chapter i think it was awesome that dean took his necklace and gave it to cas to keep it...cant wait to read what will the boys do next :) !
EvilGeniusBookWorm13 2/25/12 . chapter 7
You say fell a lot when it should be feel...cool chapter!
Verena 2/23/12 . chapter 6
Hello )

Awesome story , I like the Cas as therapist part and that Dean is mute and all that x3

But in my opinion its quite rushed at some points eg Sam and Dean know Gabe for... 1 day? and Sam and Gabe are already best buddies and stuff and Gabe is helping Sam out at work etc. That sounds a little unrealistic in my opinion as well as that Sam would take him and someone who Dean doesnt even know (Bathazar) to search for Dean when he knows that he gets panick attacks with unknown people...

well, keep up the good story, Im looking forward to it, just wanted to point out my opinion )

*gives cookies*
trax-32 2/20/12 . chapter 1
So Awesome, update more soon, pls?
EvilGeniusBookWorm13 2/17/12 . chapter 6
Oooooh drama
Alyson1.0 2/14/12 . chapter 6
well that was a great chapter! thanks, i have to say, now, i understand and like the emails idea for the beginning. Love their emails. Also, really enjoy Gabriel parts. U know, after Cas, he is my favorite angel (archangel)..

question: Sam/Gabe/Lucy sound like a love triangle?

Will Michael meet Dean soon?

please update ASAP... )
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