First of all I loooove this. So frickin' much. You write so beautifully, I think it's perfect as it is - but if you are still going to do a rewrite I can't wait to read it (haven't checked the site for it yet, I'll go do that now) because I just love it. :-) Please keep it going!

Hey! :) It's actually not a bad fic and shows a side of Meyer that he never shows to anyone else. I kind of liked it. I await the even better version :)

I an in love with these stories! Please keep writing them!

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I really enjoyed reading both chapters. I hope there will be more to come. It's nice to see a story about Meyer too. This was really well written and lovely.

I loved the 2nd chapter!

Wonderful fic! I do hope you continue with the story!

I loved this! It was beautifully written, very realistic.

Very pretty and sweet. Also well-written! I have read it several times and I must say you are very talented. You have captured the essence of Meyer Lansky and Charlie, and made his first time poignant and sweet yet also heated. Good job! I'd be interested in reading more of their story... btw, kudos on not falling into the trap of making Jane some unbelievable Mary Sue with too much beauty and not enough brains. Keep it up! The world needs more human characters in fiction.