 ha 1/25/12 . chapter 1 only crazy people like ur fics burn in hell |
 Madame Chocobo 12/15/10 . chapter 1 Well, replying to the last person, readers that's who, so please stop trolling. -_-; Anyway this is a good story and point of view on how porygon sees humans. :) |
 Magna Nebosh 6/7/10 . chapter 1 Who would ever read this? Or any of your stories? |
 Raichu 3/3/08 . chapter 1Ah, at last a Porygon story that makes sense!
One thing you haven't explained is why the Porygon actually cares about the virus. It means that its creators programmed it with a directive for self-preservation. It's not implausible, since it would help the creation from inadvertently harming itself, but a hint or two to that effect would have improved the story.
The irony is nice. No, they're not gods after all... |
 Dabrikishaw 9/7/07 . chapter 1now your scaring me... |
 Jack Keller 6/15/07 . chapter 1This is very good. It means more to me. I will not explain.
Your Porygon fics are WOW. |
 Karma 5/21/07 . chapter 1 Hello! I have to say, I'm addicted to your pokémon POVs, especially the "Not You" series. It's refreshing to see someone taking Gamefreak to task for not walking the walk. Personally, I have more issues with the purification system in Colosseum than the happiness system in the handhelds, but they're both in need of revamping. I won't get into that unless you want me to, though.
I have to say, though, that this is probably my favorite of your fics that I've read so far. The science-gone-bad theme is a bit hackneyed, and the style lacks maturity, but it's a about deicide, and that alone is enough to win me over. Did you even mean to touch upon that idea, or was the porygon's talk about its Creator ENTIRELY ironic? Normally I wouldn't bother to ask, but you seem angry and irreverent enough that the former is at least a possibility.
One final question: are you into animal rights? It seems to me that anyone who feels this way about pokémon would have to be, but I suppose that I could be mistaken.
Well, you have my email. I'd be delighted if you would get in touch.
-Karma Kalisutah |
 Azure Ghidorah 9/17/06 . chapter 1DM02: One (entire lab blows up)
Sorry, I wanted to finish that.
Lugia: *rolls eyes* |
 Redemmo 10/30/04 . chapter 1i'll give you full credit for coming up with the strangest ideas. still, it was a good fic. |
 Cosmic Mewtwo 5/28/04 . chapter 1Wow... This story was unnerving, but that's a good thing! I can't really explain or describe this... it was just... wow. |
 Tylec Asroc 12/1/03 . chapter 1Ho! Interesting monologue with a captivating twist at the end. In the final paragraph, Porygon finally speaks to Creator with a capital C. Is he refering to the true God? |
 Jailbirdy 1/16/03 . chapter 1At first I couldn't see where it was going, but I get it now. You seem violent towards humans. I find that a little strange. |
 Lightning-Strike 5/18/02 . chapter 1one
*boom*
That's the truth. I like the Porygon's perspective. It's got everything right. I like Porygons, they can do a lot. Serves the human who tried to destroy it right. Another amazing work... *wishes Farla could loan some creativity* |
 MadFearow 5/17/02 . chapter 1Great story on Porygon's thoughts. I pity that doomed scientist, but then again he deserved it! |
 Dark Destiny 5/16/02 . chapter 1Your works seem to confuse me.. Do you really view humans as not worthy of living? I don't know if i understand, but this does make me very sad. Not just for the humans.. I guess maybe for both. |