great story

Poor Luke! I'm sad for him now. But he felt better and learned from it. Thank you for updating again! Update soon please!

! Love it!

Awesome so far. Obi-Wan died though. Sadface.

*snorts* Boy, does that sound familiar. There's the Emperor we all know...and hate! Sheesh, right in front of the poor girl too. I get the feeling if Vader hadn't put his foot down about the 'slave-master' business, Laasya might actually challenge that living corpse!

Why is it that vader always gets like a short chp and padme gets like 1000?

I rly like this story and everything, but one thing, you tend to skip a lot of time periods.

Aw...I laughed. Cute. I was the same except it was with books.

Ooooo wonder whats gonna happen next! And Ive told you before but I just thought I should officially tell you that I love the interaction between Luke and padmé and I can't wait to see what you have in store for them :)

Not so easy to get rid of the terrible two year old is it? Especially if he's Force-sensitive! *Chuckles* And of course Luke's already sensing his Dada. Ugh! Not going to want to think about what'll happen when Sidious punishes Vader for something.

Talk about a plot twist! First Obi-wan ends up in the lava of Mustafar instead of Vader, then the droids are the ones who take off with Padme to Polis Massa. Now Vader taking a slave girl to raise as his own? Star you've out-done yourself big time with this story! I salute you!

P&LL \/

MTFBWU!

TAA1!

laureas

You-KILLED THE Obi-Wan?

Interesting plot twist!