 MaiaMadness 4/29/03 . chapter 2sweet! |
 Night Hawk4 8/14/02 . chapter 2That was cool! A nice description of the "good can't exist without evil" theory. I think I have a similar poem somewhere... *shuffles through millions of papers* Ah! Here... no I haven't published it.
Ahem. "I am the Light" was wonderful! Eh.. heh... I think I probably said that about 7.2 times already... *pokes weasel*... I am scizofrenic (if thats how u spell it)... *shudders* I am scared...THE MUSHROOMS ARE STARING AT ME! ... NO! THEY ARE! aHHH! *runs away screaming like a girl (which I am)*
Nighty Night,
Night Hawk |
 Madame Mad 6/12/02 . chapter 2Ha! From reading some of your other work, I knew you had to be a poet!_ Such a pretty poem- very powerful again- (I really love your poetic style)!...This poem is really philphosical (excuse my spelling please, it's late at night and I have like three, unfinished independent studies due tomorrow- ah well)...This poem just made so much sense, and created powerful imagery. I don't know what else to say but "fantastic!" Please continue writing poetry, philphosing, and minding my spelling_ Awesome job again! |
 Matt of Ravenclaw 5/15/02 . chapter 2I was a bit confused on what Harry was trying to focus on between the first half of the poem and the second. In the first half, he's contemplating how darkness can exist so that there is light. I've rarely seen such an argument in a Harry Potter Fanfiction, poem or otherwise, and it's something that is definently worth writing into. However, the second half of the poem dissolves into a stereotypical "good guy" seeking to destroy the bad guy. If you stopped it at the first half of the poem, it would have more originality. |
 Avatar000 5/15/02 . chapter 2HA made you look this is my story I wrote it He He ha ha He. |
 Mistress Cresacre 5/15/02 . chapter 2Nice poem. Are you going to write a story that revolves around it? That would be neat. Please write more soon! |
 Miss Spinn 5/15/02 . chapter 2There it is! When I came, it was only the disclaimer. Cute poem! I LOVE it! |
 Miss Spinn 5/15/02 . chapter 1I want the poem! |