Nicely crafted story!

Well done.

I don't get it...

This is a powerful, well written idea. Thanks for writing.

wow that was trippy but real good!

whoa, that is really deep. so, anakin is the Kin at the near end and Ben is talking right? and Padme tried to hide Leia, but ben ran with the two of them while Luke was calling out for anakin? the flash backs make it deep and a little confusing for the weak minded clones like me. _ still it was kick butt and i think you said it was in a magazine? that makes it even sweeter!

May The Force Be With You,

Blakaize, Vader's Other Daughter

(B: I'm the one he doesn't like to talk about.

V: Holds up sign with sharpie marker writing SHE'S EVIL SEND HELP.

B: I saw that. _

V: o_o)

To sad. *tears in eyes* I don't know why I keep reading stories with so much drama!

Still my favorite, Minky. It's lovely to see you active in fandom again. :)

wow. this is powerful. you followed a very intricate story line and i must say that you pulled it off very well.

Wow. You had my heart wrenching at ever other paragraph! This was great, but I was disappointed! I wanted Luke to go with Han and the crew! But we can't always have a happy ending, now can we? Great story, I enjoyed your excellent writing immensely! But poor Luke! RUN FOR IT LUKE! :)

Wow. Whoa. Wow. That was deep. And really good.

This was absolutely georgeous! Oh the confusion Luke faces takes away my breath. Loved it.

Good but good.

Oh goodness...

very good but sad

This was amazing, but very sad! Thanks! _