Haha. Last sentence came with a bang.. ;))

Nice..! Short but enough to make a point. Good job!

whoah. sure wish there was a sequel. nice.

I chuckled. I actually chuckled 'cause it was so... cute!

You captured Spike ohso beautifully. Wonderful work on his lines. Love it!

Hehe, cuteness. I love it.

I'm now officially a fan of YOU. All of your fics that I've read so far have been absolutely adorable :). Plus, Spike and Dawn friendship? SO sweet. You rock, dear! Please write more soon. :):):)

hehehe... i like the ending, it's funny.

i really liked your fic

U kno i really liked this.. it seems like something you would actully see on the show!

aw that was cute! There just isn't enough Spike/Dawn frienship out there(which is why I wrote one..hehe shameless plug!) bwit xx

How cute! I love S/D friendshippyness :O)

*shrugs* Yeah, technically Spike is already dead. That conversation at the end, however, was the challenge I was given. I had to use that exact conversation between him and Dawn.

Very cute. Except, well, isn't Spike *already* dead?

Awwww, that was sweet! I love stories like this. That sounded just like Spike and Dawn. Well done.