 Rewrittenword9876 5/18/03 . chapter 1Really good poem! I think it's Rachel! |
 unanamous 8/7/02 . chapter 1 what the heck does that have to do with the animorphs? |
 Anidictclint 7/24/02 . chapter 1 It's Rachel |
 Little Girl Lost 5/7/02 . chapter 1Wow, this was really good, Wendy! This is Jennifer, from your Algebra class. I think this poem proves you are a talented writer and you should keep up the good work.
hey this is john
from john: its pretty cool. i've read the books though and i think that it is about what they were thinking. tip:(even though i don't know squat about poetry) read one of the books preferably later on in the series and do it from a character's point of view. like rachel or cassie. this is still a good poem though.! yah its cool |
 sthesea 1/17/01 . chapter 1 I thought it was really great! You should definitely write more! |
 procyon 12/3/00 . chapter 1Wow. That was totally deep, and totally kicked ass. Sounds like a Tobias P.O.V., is it? Or am I totally crazy...oops, I'm crazy anyways!
LOL
Later. |
 Gerri 11/17/00 . chapter 1 You know what? If you can write better, that's really awesome! But seriously, this one's already *very* good for a so-called "test" poem. :) |
 Selena Benilo 9/27/00 . chapter 1 That was great!I'm posting mesmerised right have my permission to use it! |
 You'dNeverGuess 9/25/00 . chapter 1it's a good poem but i still don't no who it is. i guess that he/she is some sortta human controller? dunno |
 Bookworm 9/22/00 . chapter 1How depressing... i mean, it's a great poem and everything, but just makes me feel so ::sigh:: alone. ; ' ) |
 Paige Collins 9/21/00 . chapter 1Paige: COOL. *MeghanJinx her rolls eyes*: And *why* wouldn't they be acceptable? |
 Asabethblue 9/21/00 . chapter 1 This is really good, I know this guy who writes poems like that. He's a professional and he's bent on death and destruction. Anywho. That was real choice. Do sum more! I havent a clue who it is Although i'll guess; is it Ax? |
 RasberryGirl 9/21/00 . chapter 1I don't see how it pertains to Animorphs. oh well. It was repititious during some parts, used the same phrases and words a lot. But I really liked it. ::two thumbs up:: |
 Saber Tooth 9/21/00 . chapter 1 I'm signed in, I swear! Jeez, what is *wrong* with this thing? *bangs his comp* Grr. Anyway, great poem. There were a few spelling/grammar errors, and it could be better, but hey, so could ALL of my stuff. Anyway, I got the impression this was a Marco poem, with people thinking him dead and all, and Marco's probably one of my favorite characters. And songfics are quite acceptable, as a matter of fact, they're my favorite kind. I'm working on 2 right now. _ Again, meesalikes! |
 Fitey888 9/21/00 . chapter 1Cool poem. Next time, tell who's POV its in. Otherwise, good.
:) |