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Candice 2002-10-04 ch 2, anon.	abuseWhat a great story. I don't even watch Alias that much, and I know this is AU, but that seemed to be a great portrayl of what could happen. That was so deep. Good job. :)
Glittering Pegasus 2002-07-17 ch 2,	abuseaww this is so sad. sweet, though. i do think will/ francie would make a pretty cute couple. continue this, it's really good. :-)
Karen T 2002-06-04 ch 2,	abuseMan, I am so behind with my reviews. Anyway, this was the first Wancie story I ever read and really enjoyed the beginning you've created. There was a nice tension between Will and Sydney in this second chapter. (Perhaps hinting at some sort of undercurrent to their relationship that you're going to explore later?) Wonderful start. Hope you'll post more soon.
Fanatic482 2002-05-23 ch 2,	abusei'm not usually one to jump the wancie train, but this is just truly wonderful fiction... besides which, i can't wait to find out what new turn you'll take in the next chapter!
icyfire 2002-05-22 ch 2,	abuseHey, Jenai, knowing what the original idea was and watching it grow into this fic, I have to say that I love it. The tone of the scene, the words spoken between Will and Syd, strike me as just perfect. Great job! Robin
phriendly11 2002-05-20 ch 2,	abuseall I gotta say is that I really love it. Really, I do. Thank you, Jenai!
Thorne 2002-05-20 ch 2,	abuseWow. I read this all in a quick gulp, and now I want more. It so gorgeous and sad and angsty. This really is some of the best stuff you have ever written. The part about the necklace just killed me, BTW. sniff
laby jess 2002-05-20 ch 2, anon.	abuseJenai, I am so impressed. Wonderful, wonderful job with this, really, hands down the best I've seen you write. Great use of Amy, wonderful pacing, a nice clinching ending. Very smart move, letting the reader see Will through Sydney's eyes, I think the angst was a lot more effective this chapter than the last where we didn't have a portal to really see how other people around him noticed his decline. Aww...go jenai go!
Jen11 2002-05-20 ch 2,	abuseWow, that was wonderful :) I hope to read more soon!
laras-dice 2002-05-20 ch 2,	abuseSniffle Incredible chapter. This was painful to read, but in a good way -- Syd and Will's emotions and reflections felt very real. And I love that there's still this suspense, that Will is tumbling toward something. I want to know what, so next chapter soon, please!
Ashni 2002-05-18 ch 1,	abuseReally nice job, Jenai! I love that line: "He turned back to watch her, afraid that if he blinked she’d be gone just like her mother." The use of flashbacks was effective and you didn't stray into melodrama....the ending also tied up everything very well. A great piece! - Nicole
laby jess 2002-05-18 ch 1, anon.	abuseooh, what a nice job, now that I have the time to sit down and appreciate it. I thought you did a great job with the italics sections, they flowed really well between the action in the present, and that's damn hard to do right. Hurry up with part 2~
Valerina 2002-05-17 ch 1,	abuseOh, what a nifty story! I love how you wove in Spy!Will without actually discussing it. Short and sweet and I'd love to see more :)
thedorkygirl 2002-05-16 ch 1,	abuseOh. That was great. Sad, but seriously good. I'm glad that you are writing it. And . . . I'm sorry, I'm really REALLY tired, studying for clepping out of some classes, so just read my review of your fic in my website. It's in my profile. I'm sorry for giving you a cop out in your review -- I honestly liked this story! But I can't think of anything really original and new to say. I used all my adjectives in math class!
pharo 2002-05-16 ch 1,	abuseJenai, I'm so happy that you're not paying attention to the garbage that reviewer has spilled. I like the story and can't wait for you to continue. I didn't think about Will being the spy until the Devlin line. At first, I thought it was a consequence of his following the Danny story or something, but when I read it, I thought, "whoa...nice plot". Good job.

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