VERY FUNNY!

Words...simply...fail

Hey! Glad you're back!

This was okay. Pretty linear, but I loved Zim's cameo at the end! That constitutes a sequel...or at least an explanation of why he "owed her"...

So...yeah. Me go now, bye-bye.

PRHG: Zim? Hmm... I wonder what she did that he owed her so much for? THIS NEEDS A SEQUEL!

Purple: *tugging on the ship* MIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNEEEEEE!

Red: MIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNEEEEE!

PRHG: THAT'S IT! *grabs the chip and eats it*

Purple: *gapes*

Red: *watches with big sad eyes* Hey...

PRHG: Oh shut up.

Purple and Red: YES MA'AM! *salute*

PRHG: I hope they can pull it off... this fight is starting to get on my nerves... *points at the STILL fighting Almighty Tallests*

Purple: *punching and biting Red* ALVA'S !

Red: *punching Purple and kicking him as they roll around the room* !

great beginnig shows potential and great riembursement

try showing some more detial though

Hey this story was pretty good! And funny! Please make a new chapter!

LOL! I love the tallest, and all but crap thier like toddelrs! very good write more!

Purple: *punching Red* ALVA LOVES MEEEEEE!

Red: NO MEEEEEEEE! *punches Purple*

*The Tallests then tumble around the room, kicking, biting, and punching each other*

PRHG: ...*eats some popcorn* This is getting interesting...

this is awful! how could you say mine was bad look this blah!

Um, I started writing the next chapter, but stuff happened. I suppose i can post what I have so far. I hope I can get back into writing my fanfics again...if you haven't noticed everything i've done has been halted...

I WANT to send you the pictures-I had them all drawn up and scanned into the computer and everything-but my fucker of an Internet Server won't let me send to your account for some reason! Or Flipside's, for that matter! I'm so sorry...I was so pissed!

Is there somewhere else I could post them for you?

this is pretty good. poor poor Alva. I know how she feels. You just want to strangle them all. ALL OF THEM! Ahem, sorry, got carried away. Plez continue. Or i will be forced to release my curly fries of DOOM! they ARE getting humgry ya know.

Aurie: Awww poor lem...

Kira: Good fic

Purple: **throws a granade at Red**

Red: **gets hit with the granade**

Aurie: WOOHOO!

Black: Hey I've found the Tallests' weakness!((Aurie and Black have been trying to destroy the tallests massive while they fight over Alva))

Aurie: They're idiots and fall for any Irken over 5"3?

Black: er...no...**pulls up a slide of the Death Star from star wars** You see we've found a thermal exhaust pipe and **notices that the slide is the death star** er wrong slide...**fumbles with the slide clicker, it turns to a picture of a massive** We enter through here..

Aurie: Why there?

Black: Because it's the frount door. Doors make great entrances.

Aurie: NOT WHEN YOU'RE SNEAKING IN!

Kira: Aurie stop giving yourself more lines...any way...before I was so rudely interupted by *somebody*

Aurie: Shut up...lets watch the tallest kill themselves...

Kira:**pulls out popcorn** fine with me!

PRHG: LOL! Poor Lem! Man, I feel REALLY bad for Alva! *watches as the Tallests now plot to kill Lem*

Purple: We'll put a bomb in his Voot Cruiser...

Red: Yes and then... BOOOOOOM!

Both: !

PRHG: ...