oh good god please stop taking so long to up date lol. you leave the chapters at a climax point of ''what happens next'' and then I have to wait a month for an answer and it kills me.

on another solid point though im really enjoying the plot and I cant wait to see what her hero name is

I apologise for not reviewing this chapter in a while, but I've just got around to reading it again. I'm liking it, Taylor is quite different from other OC characters in this fandom, and that's a good thing, it makes her more interesting to read about. It's fun to see how she reacts to different characters. Wonder if she will fight crime in a wet suit? We'll have to see. Can't wait to see more when it's ready. Great job.

Oooh what happens UPDATE QUICKLY PLEASE, does whats-his-face get peppeD sprayed by Taylor 'cause that would be pretty funny, now update :D

OOOOOOHHH! I bet that Jed is secretly a villan.

cool

Please write more soon ... This story has great potential

I hope this review finds you well, I rather enjoyed reading this, and I gather that it's Pre-Kick-ass, therefore it's before the movie/comic accident, and I am looking forward to the next chapters, which hopefully your muse will release as soon as they are ready for you to put on screen and share! I don't think I wanna kill you or even hate you for writing this story, honestly wondering tho, as things progress, if your gonna have Dave and Katie wind up together for a while, or just leave her "hanging"? LOL, actually, just wanting to read the story and see what you come up with, so no spoilers requested here! Hope to read the next chapters soon! Very very good start to the story! and nice to see the start of things from a perspective other than Dave's or Mindy's!

Firstly, you just just need to keep writing practice make perfect!

Secondly, try and make your own story don't follow one that's been done! however outlandish it may be just write something original even if its inspired by Kick-Ass!

Thirdly, detail! no matter how boring it is to sit there and describe maybe the way a room looks or a hallway or even a tree that Taylor sits under whilst eating her lunch (and trust me i KNOW how boring it can be) those things make a book! the reader wants to see what she sees they want to make their own mental image of it all.

Fourth, try and get some back story going not just a relationship but something you can refer to latter on in the story that doesn't seem to important but actually is .. people like being tricked in books!

The best way to do this is to read it yourself if you can engross yourself in your OWN book when you know whats going to happen you know you can get others to read!

another idea is a Dictaphone, talk into it some people speak better then writing then relay your script onto paper, it worked for me in my A-Level English language essay, when i had to write a short story that ended up 100 pages long .. oopss lol

Hope this helps a little

I am already anxiously waiting how the get together Brian is planing will turn out!

This is a good fanfiction, I'm extremely satisfied to have stayed and read the remaining chapters.

I do strongly encourage you to write more...please.

Keep up the excellent work!

I knew it!

Dave must look terrible having having been sprayed with mace.

Lol!

SO anxious to read the next chapter!

Who did Taylor spray?

Was it Dave!

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This is so suspenceful, I'm so eager to continue reading.

Ugh, Katie and her friends are such beotches.

I hope Dave changes his mind and starts liking Taylor instead.

She's much more collected and awesome anyway.

Once more, great chapter.

I really enjoy reading your story!

Poor Taylor, it must be hard to cope through a father's dead.

I do wonder where things will go from here.

This chapter is very well done.

You must feel very proud. :)

Another neat chapter, wonder how their first meet will go. Best of luck for the next chapter, can't wait.

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I hope Chris doesn't get a crush on her because things would get hella awkward.