 ShineX 2009-09-02 . chapter 1If he isn't a mutant himself then this story is crap; otherwise, it has potential to be good.
One thing to point out, even Ranma will kill when it comes down to him or them with no alternative. With this in mind, I don't see why he wasn't killing the amazons, and, more importantly, why he joined a group of murderers without complaint (I mean, I can understand giving in till they just leave in the night, but you mentioned training).
With some revision this could've made a good story. 'Course that doesn't matter anymore considering it's abandoned *shrugs* |
 DeltaKyuubi 2008-08-27 . chapter 1cool story cant wait till you update |
 brindani 2006-12-29 . chapter 1I find this as a rather interesting story. Ranma learns techniques a little fast, but that is the general idea. I suggest adding a little more detail about what happens when Ranma does learn a new technique as it only looks like supernatural talent instead of something acting on Ranma's behalf.
I look forward to seeing what happens next and greatly hope the story has not been set aside.
brindani |
 Slade13 2004-05-29 . chapter 1any chance you could pick this one up again? it's a great read, please continue.
till next... |
 Yami Bite Yumi Me Chan 2002-08-31 . chapter 1more more more more! i like no, love this story and idea . i really enjoy ranma 1/2 and x-men crossovers buy i dont see or find many >_ |
 dog-boy 2002-06-06 . chapter 1Excellent! Please Update Soon! I Love This Fic! |
 Yak 2002-05-31 . chapter 1Very nice AU. And fantastic dialogue. Cologne's sudden acceptance of Ranma was both funny and highlghted her deviousness. The X-men bit seemed tacked on at the end.
Overall this was great, and I'd like to see more than just one chapter. ^_^
Goodluck, Yakumo. |
 Zsych 2002-05-17 . chapter 1Love it so far. And being friends with the amazons should be a good thing.
I wonder how Happi's gonna deal with this situation. |
 EternallyLost 2002-05-16 . chapter 1Well, it appears this aleternate universe's Jusenkyo is just a hoax. But then why did it work on Ranma? And is Ranma a mutant, or just his cursed form, or is he just really good at picking up techniques all of the sudden? And what'll happen with the other characters now? It'll be interesting to find out everything. Keep up the good work. |
 miasu 2002-05-16 . chapter 1Correction:
Its Westchester NY, (not Winchester) which is a county. I live in Westchester, so I know this.
Good story though. Continue it. |
 D-Chan3 2002-05-16 . chapter 1Well, I must say that I like how you've started it. I'm curious as to how you will continue this. Since Ranma is now a member of the Amazons, will he end up being engaged to Akane by both his parent and the Amazon law when Akane finally blows her top and mallets him?
I hope it happens that way. I'd also like to see Akane as a mutant as well.
Please continue! |
 CyberAngelOne 2002-05-16 . chapter 1Hmm good start I can't wait to see the next chapter. |
 Subspace000 2002-05-16 . chapter 1Very nice story, i think im really gonna like dis one |
 Shinji Ikari7 2002-05-16 . chapter 1Sorry man but that last part was just stupid. I mean how stupid can you be any way? You had better rework Ranma's character hmm I'd say ALOT! For starteds moron Ranma didn't fight girls unless he was in his girl form I don't care what you say that he learned to from the **en amazons. Above all Ranma has a high sence of honor much like Logan from the comics. I mean after Ranma did keep Ryoga's secret from Akane. And if you did that to avoid the whole issue of him and her having to get married you are just a dumb **. I'd say you either need to go back and watch the series again or reread the manga because your characterition of the Ranma characters suck. I don't know about your X-men characters yet but if its going to be any thing like your Ranma characters well this fic should be doomed. If I were you do a full rewrite and rework your characters. One more thing WHY THE ** ISN'T GENMA A **EN PANDA?!?! That was one of the cooler things about the series he was **en funny as hell. Well thats all the complaining I'll do for now.
Have a nice day. |