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wait until after she graduates from Hogwarts

YOU NEED TO WRIGHT A NEW CHAPTER

Update! Also is the winx club going to be involved too? Maybe even season five? :o

REALLY? YOU HAVE TO HAVE A CLIFFHANGER THERE? Oh well, I want her to go to Alfea.

put double duty, and end up learning both ways. Like Hermione with muggle and witch studies... kind of.

I say let her go to Alfea, you'd wouldn't have a story otherwise, You should continue this story, i'm saying this as it looks like you haven't updated in a few months but you've got a good thing going with this story and i would love to see how you end it.

Oh! Nice cliffhanger! This story is definitely intriguing and I hope you continue on with it despite what other people think. This story has great potential and I'm looking forward to see how the other characters develop. Update soon!

Well written once again. The only suggestions I have are that you could add a bit more description and that you could possibly try varying the sentence lengths. Right now, most of your sentences seem to be on the shorter side and a bit choppy at times. I think if you added in some longer sentences and a bit more description, that this would flow really well.

The dialogue in here is really realistic and I like that you change up the verbs so it's not always "James said", "Lily said", "Teddy said", etc. There are a couple of grammar mistakes that I picked up on but most of them are minor and are ones that even I get messed up on. You manage to keep the pace of the story moving. One thing I would recommend is to use less exclamation marks, as using too many can sometimes come off as fake, but that's just my personal opinion.

alfea...she's a potter she'll never be normal.

can't wait to read more

I'd wait, but in the end it's your decision.

I think that Lili will go to Alfea after she is done with Hogworts

More please its great!