Oh . . . are you going to do a mini adventure with the Valeyard? That would be so cool! And I love the fact you slipped the 11th Doctor and Amy and Rose in!

Beautiful! Absolutely beautiful! I loved it!

The quote from the 4th Doctor and your mention of The Valeyard gave me chills. I hope your theory is right... that the Time War stopped The Valeyard from coming into being.

I know the whole point of this little one shot was to mention stuff from Classic Who (and a bit of New Who) but so many of them made me smile. Mentions of Susan and Romana especially. I wish I would have read this sooner. It is both powerful and fairy tale like, and I love it.

Ooh, awesome. You're a brilliant writer, you know? Your stories are really cool to read. I know I'm only a 12 year old and I dont really have much reading experience, but this series is awesome! Please keep writing.