How bout a sequel make my lovely little touma come back 'fore its too late!

*starts to scream really loud and throws things around yelling about how Rowen better get out of that car and Sage better run down there and scream 'I love you'*

*bows to SoA* domo arigato for the story. Depressing, but still flawless. I have a plan for an amazing PWP...if you want in on it let meknow.

Ja ne! Lunar Despair

NO you better not jump from a bridge I'm happy that there are good yaoi writers to insoirer me and if you jump of the bridge I'll go with you ::digs in closet for swim suit:: Well stay alive and please don't kill yourself K ::puppy Dog Eyes:: Well See Ya!

You must explain me something, why can you only write angst fics about Seiji and Touma? I know you like Seiji as the uke, so why not an happy fic Seiji and Touma with an happy uke Seiji and an Happy sema Touma?

Carine

I liked your story a lot. The way you made Touma the one leaving rather than Seiji was a good twist. You may want to have a second sight (maybe you call it a beta reader) look at it and correct some of the grammar. Is there going to be more? There is potential for a sequel but it isn't necessary, the story is good all alone. Good work! _ have some cookies!

And they call me evil? I'm sitting here bawling my eyes out! That was soooo sad! I loved the twist on the dutiful son... That was original as far as I could see.

Great fic... and you really should write more Seiji and Touma fics! What would be cool would be to sequel this... Does Touma really honor his father's wishes? Does Seiji go home to honor his? Do either of them ever find happiness? Do they ever get back together and finally make out like little bunnies?

Touma: "Do you ever think of anything else besides watching Seiji and I make out?" *Glares at wildefyre*

wildefyre: "NO!"

Touma: "I thought so!"

Great chapter... Keep up the good work!