hahaha oh wow, poor Spock! This was great!

Simple, make it a two or three shot. Make the next one about the negotiations and some cute moments with Spock and Kirk.

I'm in total agreement with your other reviewers - would love to find out if Spock's regard is returned

I would like to see more of this! You should have Spock and Kirk trying to act like they're married for the aliens and somehow Spock's real feelings show through. Maybe the aliens want them to kiss and Spock puts way more love into it than he should, prehaps Jim feels it through some sort of telepathic connection when they kiss. I think you could have a lot of fun with this!

you knowthis sounds like itd be awsome if you kept giong with it

Of course (not coarse which has a different meaning) there's nothing to worry about, except Spock's feelings, would love to see what happens next, if you were keen.