Very smooth beginning, hopefully you don't mind watering down the gritty, dark atmosphere with some romance eventually.

Cheers

I only noticed this story lately, and I'm glad someone else has written a BMT/HP crossover XD There needs to be more.

I think this story is really interesting, I never thought about combining the 2 worlds in this sort of way, and it certainly is no easy feat. But you're managing really well so far, and I hope you continue on updating it :D

How intriguing... It's certainly interesting to read about Harry Potter and Imardin at once. I'm looking forward to the encounters with guild's magicians as well as meeting more familiar characters from BMT. Keep writing, you've caught my interest.

love it, love how harry is growing and how he lives, has he had any contact with the nobles yet? and will this turn into yaoi or will harry ever go home? can't wait, please write more!

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Seems that Harry is learning some hard life lessons in his new environment. Thanks for sharing.

Interesting chapter, I especially like how Harry reflected on how hes changed.

Is Harry just scared or is the Life Debt compelling him to be so revealing of his magic, yes I get that he would have to work for Shin and speak abit of his magic but he was not even trying to be vague. Peter Pettigrew showed that Life Debt are not that enslaving.

Very good story so far, I hope you'll continue with this

Great start

Poor Harry. I like that Dumbles was upfront with him in this fic. While it is good that Harry does not have to deal with the wizards scorn like he did in canon, he is in a worse situation now. Will their be any pairings? I hope that things get better for him soon.

Good start to your story although I'm not familier with the Black Magician Trilogy, it is still a good read. Thanks for sharing!