|Reviews for Chronicles of the Darcsen Brotherhood|
| Spinnerweb 4/20/13 . chapter 33
I really enjoyed the similes in this chapter - 'every bullet was like a horse kick'. That's a pretty original expression.
Keep up the good work.
| Spinnerweb 2/15/13 . chapter 31
I'm glad I took the time out of revising for my exams to read this; it was so romantic! *wipes away tear* The 'she's all yours tiger' line made me smile as well.
Though the adjective for 'seduce' is seductive. As in, 'her eyes were seductive.' Not 'seducers.' Thought it'd help :)
| Spinnerweb 1/16/13 . chapter 30
Good chapter, once again.
| Spinnerweb 12/10/12 . chapter 29
I loved this chapter. It was worth the wait.
| Spinnerweb 10/22/12 . chapter 28
This chapter was great, but just to be constructive there's actually a pretty big mistake at the end.
"No way I can't fail" means "I will definitely fail." It should really be "There is no way I can fail" or "with them by my side I can't fail."
Just trying to help :)
| Spinnerweb 10/1/12 . chapter 27
This chapter was awesome. I'm glad the wait was worth it.
| Spinnerweb 9/10/12 . chapter 26
This chapter was excellent; the way Neroh breaks up he fight between the Darcsen and Heaven Arms soldier and that part between Nanah and Neroh was so beautiful *sniffs*
| Spinnerweb 9/1/12 . chapter 25
Loved this chapter and the way it ended was excellent. :)
| EmpireMJH 8/26/12 . chapter 24
Wow, a darcsen version of the valkyria, I thought i was the only one to think of that but wow its good, please update comrade
| Spinnerweb 8/23/12 . chapter 24
Nice chapter. The only correction I want to make is that Selvaria has a lance, not a sword; otherwise this chapter was excellent :D
| VC Fan No.1 8/20/12 . chapter 23
Yeah, brilliant please keep adding more.
Out of curiosity, what would happen if the Brotherhood bumped into Calamity Raven
| Guest 8/18/12 . chapter 23
I liked this chapter a lot. Fredric's backstory was really sad and you did a really good job making a backstory for the characters to explain what drives them while fighting.
| Spinnerweb 8/11/12 . chapter 22
Awesome chapter. Makes for a really good next chapter too because it'd be awesome to know the characters' backstories
| Spinnerweb 8/5/12 . chapter 21
I would recommend proof-reading them before uploading them though, because there were some (small) mistakes like 'massage' instead of 'message.'
| Guest 7/23/12 . chapter 20
Talk about awesome
Bring out the Guns, Bombs knives and well add a bit more romance in it ok.