I really enjoyed the similes in this chapter - 'every bullet was like a horse kick'. That's a pretty original expression.
Keep up the good work.

I'm glad I took the time out of revising for my exams to read this; it was so romantic! *wipes away tear* The 'she's all yours tiger' line made me smile as well.
Though the adjective for 'seduce' is seductive. As in, 'her eyes were seductive.' Not 'seducers.' Thought it'd help :)

Good chapter, once again.

I loved this chapter. It was worth the wait.

This chapter was great, but just to be constructive there's actually a pretty big mistake at the end.
"No way I can't fail" means "I will definitely fail." It should really be "There is no way I can fail" or "with them by my side I can't fail."
Just trying to help :)

This chapter was awesome. I'm glad the wait was worth it.

This chapter was excellent; the way Neroh breaks up he fight between the Darcsen and Heaven Arms soldier and that part between Nanah and Neroh was so beautiful *sniffs*

Loved this chapter and the way it ended was excellent. :)

Wow, a darcsen version of the valkyria, I thought i was the only one to think of that but wow its good, please update comrade

Nice chapter. The only correction I want to make is that Selvaria has a lance, not a sword; otherwise this chapter was excellent :D

Yeah, brilliant please keep adding more.
Out of curiosity, what would happen if the Brotherhood bumped into Calamity Raven

I liked this chapter a lot. Fredric's backstory was really sad and you did a really good job making a backstory for the characters to explain what drives them while fighting.

Awesome chapter. Makes for a really good next chapter too because it'd be awesome to know the characters' backstories

Great chapter.
I would recommend proof-reading them before uploading them though, because there were some (small) mistakes like 'massage' instead of 'message.'

Talk about awesome
Bring out the Guns, Bombs knives and well add a bit more romance in it ok.