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qt4good
2009-11-09 . chapter 18
Amazing work once again!
Two things though:
1) I noticed in all four of your stories, you write "stirred" or "stir" instead of what I think you mean "steered" and "steer". To stir something would be to take a spoon and move it in circles in a teacup. To steer something would be to take the wheel of a car and move it in a different direction. see dictionary . com for precise meanings.
2) You foreshadowed some Jonah & Rose love... Maybe you can write a story of them at Hogwarts and finding each other? Starting from when Rose first gets there (Jonah's older though) or from any point you like. It would be an awesome read!
Rori Potter
2008-12-08 . chapter 3
That was good. I like those.
Jac Danvers
2008-08-06 . chapter 18
This series is one of the best I've ever read. You're characters are unique, believable, and most importantly, develop through the story. Claire, Laurel, and Serene are amazing, and you should be incredibly proud of these wonderful stories.
Lycanrai Moraine
2008-02-12 . chapter 1
I just really like this history... all the three actually, but this one is my favorite^^
B E R Y I L L I U M
2007-12-28 . chapter 18
I would like to say that this was a very interseting experience.I enjoyed it very much and although I'ld rather not admit it,it made me cry quite a few times.In my opion it was very good.
insensitivewart
2007-09-02 . chapter 1
YAY What a wonderful story! I will read and review! :D
PeppermintAndCinnamon
2007-02-24 . chapter 18
I really loved this story of yours. It was very well written and full of detail. Great work!
whitereflections12
2006-12-07 . chapter 18
This is so beautiful, and so much like Remus...the whole story. I love wolves, and the idea of the kind of love werewolves have, eternal and constant. A wonderful love story.
DragonMaiden
2006-02-08 . chapter 18
Wow, what a beautiful ending! You are such a fantastic writer, and your English is pretty much perfect! Amazing, amazing job.

*skips off to read Epilogue*
Sky Pad
2005-07-12 . chapter 14
cool
Miranda Derby
2005-03-17 . chapter 18
I like your writting it is very creative. I could never write anything this good!! Please
e-mail the Title and rating your sequel is under at mirapybred@
Sincerley
MIranda P. Derby
Cherry-Alanna
2004-07-29 . chapter 18
Out of the triliogy, this one is by far the greatest! sweetest! cutest!
Out of all the Remus/OC fics, Serene is the first character I actually want Remus to be with. Remus is my fave character in the HP series so I loved her with him. And the whole lifemate thing rocked and made perfect sense. It's actually a belief i had ever before reading these stories.

And for each fic:
For most original/creative story--Whole Again Severus.
For sweetest story-Whole Again Remus
For coolest plot-Whole Again Sirius (cept I did not like Claire all that much, she seemed to confuse sex and love.)

For cutest couple--Whole Again Remus. Remus/Serene forever!

-Cherry-Alanna
LunasStar
2004-05-30 . chapter 18
Well, I know its been a while since this story was posted but I am going to give you another review anyway. I really like the whole again series. Espcecially the epilogue. And I think you should write somemore stories instead of just these ones. Plese think about it.
*~LunasStar~*
LunasStar
2003-11-17 . chapter 18
Hey,
I love tehse storie.
I started reading them with the remus one which to tell you was confusing.
THey are really good.
Please keep writing, to bad there wasnt a whole again harry.
~luna~
Tracey Claybon
2003-07-04 . chapter 18
I've enjoyed all your stories so far - thanks for helping me pass a wonderful weekend.

Tracey
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